Thanks for your feedback, I think on the first slogan can be, and must be shortened - because its too long. It can be simplier as "Where your Heart leaps". As usually most of the slogans must be like an command, or something like that. Ok, should I turn all of them into Tshirt samples, or you guys have an suggestion witch one must not to be included for surely?
The Fraternity text as I have noticed, not really useful, and can be turned or used everywhere, so I will drop that. But the others are fine?
I think "The Freedom is a Feature" is nice, but a bit one sided. Because the 4F is already contains it, imho. However, it can be nice design as I feel.
"Feel it where your heart leaps" actually sounds a little awkward
from an English standpoint - certainly poetic but perhaps overly
elaborate.
I think "Freedom as a Feature" is also a nice idea or theme for the
10 year celebration too ...
Kirk
On 12/07/2012 12:52 PM, Lailah wrote:
I love the first: "Feel it where your heart leaps". Is simply,
effective and even poetic.
I think it would be perfect if there's translations for other
languages.
What do you think?
Lailah
El vie, 07-12-2012 a las 12:06 +0100, Zoltan Hoppar escribió:
Hi everyone,
back in Fudcon Paris I have brainstormed on Fedora Tshirt
slogans, and I would like to send it to the designer public as
input, to get some feedback and ideas around them. I would like
to hear some nay, yay, so - opinions - and sketches if somebody
can imagine something to them. So HTH, here are the thought
slogans. (I have also made some possible artwork suggestion, but
feel free to praise, or curse them, or transform with your
inspiration as you like - just please send your feedback here.
Thanks! :)
1. Feel it where your Heart leaps - Fedora (Here can be an Heart
Xray image where the heart is the fedora bubble logo)
2. /fəˈdɔː.rə/ - Pronounce our way (fedora logo only and text on
back)
3. Feel the (4Flogo) around you. (fedora logo and text with 4F
logo)
4. Get serious. Ask Fedora. - ask.fedoraproject.org/
(fedora logo on front, and text only on back)
5. Linux Future is (F-logo)ront of you (This text on the front,
optionally anything/nothing on back)
6. RC Beta Alpha Sigma Fedora - Fraternity of the Engineering
Team (Idea is based on fraternities that all the universities
have in USA, not a clear idea for artwork)
7. One Mind. One Heart. One Community: www.fedoracommunity.org
(simple text on front, and only the website URL goes to the back
with Fedora bubble)
8. Get new Life with Fedora - boot.fedoraproject.org
- (simple text on front, URL on back)
9. Are you Fedora? Be our contributor at.... Here and now. join.fedoraproject.org
(not clear idea)
10. It's a (F-bubble logo)usion. Between Devs and Machine.
(Cyberpunk theme?)