---------- Forwarded message ---------- From: shatadru bandyopadhyay shatadru.fedora@gmail.com Date: Thu, Nov 15, 2012 at 11:36 PM Subject: Re: [Design-team] Fedora 18 Release Poster To: Ryan rlerch@redhat.com

Thanks for the suggestions . I will also upload more variations that I am working on . I will also upload the .svg asap :)

On Thu, Nov 15, 2012 at 9:13 PM, Ryan rlerch@redhat.com wrote:

On Thu 15 Nov 2012 09:20:22 EST, shatadru bandyopadhyay wrote:

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https://fedorahosted.org/**design-team/attachment/ticket/** 247/variation1_preview.jpghttps://fedorahosted.org/design-team/attachment/ticket/247/variation1_preview.jpg (186KB) On Thu, Nov 15, 2012 at 7:17 PM, shatadru bandyopadhyay <shatadru.fedora@gmail.com <mailto:shatadru.fedora@gmail.**comshatadru.fedora@gmail.com>> wrote:

Hello mailing list ,

                         I have just uploaded one variation of the
release poster that I have made , please let me know what
additions or alterations can be done to make it better .




 Shatadru Bandyopadhyay .

Link to High res png file :
https://fedorahosted.org/**design-team/attachment/ticket/**

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This is fantastic!

just a few quick thoughts:

• the white drop shadow around the fedora logo at the top makes the fedora

logo look pretty blurry. How does it look without a dropshadow at all?

• i love the big bold "18", but not a huge fan of how glossy it is. Maybe

making the 18 white and lowering the transparency of it might work. Also, a few of the people in the photo are hitting their heads on the 18. Giving them a bit of breathing room should also make the 18 pop more.

Overall, i love the design. Is the source SVG available anywhere too?

cheers, ryanlerch