Hi Davide,
The Magazine editorial board reviewed the pitch/draft you submitted to
the Magazine about PMF. We liked the idea that this content helps
users solve a problem they may run into if they upgrade to Fedora 28.
However, it was also very detailed in ways that will probably deter
readers from reading the article.
Could you rework this article to be simpler, and eliminating some of
the unnecessary technical details? We don't assume all users are
stupid. But on the other hand, readers have a limited attention span
according to our metrics, so the Magazine aims for higher readability,
and articles that focus on their problem and how to solve it.
Let us know what you think.
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