We hadn't seen anything back from you on the PMF topic article you
did. Did you have any questions or concerns about the feedback from
the editorial meeting? Anything else we can do to help you move
On Wed, Jul 18, 2018 at 5:28 PM Paul W. Frields <stickster(a)gmail.com> wrote:
> Hi Davide,
> The Magazine editorial board reviewed the pitch/draft you submitted to
> the Magazine about PMF. We liked the idea that this content helps
> users solve a problem they may run into if they upgrade to Fedora 28.
> However, it was also very detailed in ways that will probably deter
> readers from reading the article.
> Could you rework this article to be simpler, and eliminating some of
> the unnecessary technical details? We don't assume all users are
> stupid. But on the other hand, readers have a limited attention span
> according to our metrics, so the Magazine aims for higher readability,
> and articles that focus on their problem and how to solve it.
> Let us know what you think.
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