Shaun, this is another slam dunk. You are really good at these articles.
Each has been very clearly written and has just the right balance of
content -- how to get core tasks done without getting too esoteric.
One thing I did in editing... and this is REALLY nitpicky... is using
"will" for future tense. I find I can usually eliminate this in favor of
present tense for incrementally stronger writing. For example, "this button
will turn the screen off" becomes "this button turns the screen off."
Again, this is a nit. I found your prose easy to read and top-notch. Really
well done!
I finished minor edits on this article, so it's ready to go anytime.
Paul
On Wed, Oct 9, 2019 at 8:31 AM Shaun Assam <thebeardedhermit(a)hotmail.com>
wrote:
Greetings,
The 4th article in the Cockpit series is complete and ready for review. As
always if there's any suggestions let me know.
Regards,
Shaun Assam
FAS: sassam
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