Hi Mark, It certainly needs some rework, but I really comprehend your effort. Few things which I could suggest after looking at in first quick glance are: -You could pick the intro/outro video from existing videos of Fedora's Vimeo channel. -The transmutation part is also an area which needs to be worked again. But as you said this is the first draft, I would suggest to keep a note of the above points while working on its later versions. I am sure there are folks here which could help you further in this. -- Regards Nitesh Narayan Lal http://www.niteshnarayanlal.org/