Richard Fontana <fontana(a)sharpeleven.org> wrote ..
Or do you think even the second reading supports that
interpretation?
That's my concern to my (non-lawyer) eyes, yes.
Perhaps it would be clearer with either one of these two changes?
"My Work" means the particular version of the work of authorship
I license to You under this License.
or, leave the original definition of My Work in place and instead:
The conditions in sections 3 through 5 no longer apply to a
particular version of My Work once fifteen years have elapsed
from the date of My first Distribution of that version of My
Work under this License.
Although this wording seems somewhat clunky.