Hi!
You're missing a dot after "in 2015" and a comma after "and
others". You
also wrote "finall", was it maybe "finally"?
This sentence "The physical pursuits couple with his rabbit food meal plan
help keep him in shape.". I understand it but it could be better I think.
Those are the ones I caught at the moment. Maybe there are others I
overlooked.
Regards,
Silvia
FAS: Lailah
2018-01-06 1:35 GMT+01:00 charles profitt <fedora(a)cprofitt.com>:
Hello all:
The next How Do You Fedora article is ready for review.
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=19863&preview=1&_ppp=55c04036f6
Sorry for the delay on this one. I have one more person I am
contacting, but due to robotics it might take a while to put together
and get ready.
Charles
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