Hey All, I have drafted a small article on how to automate lights with PIR sensor and Arduino with Fedora https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/post.php?post=17213&action=edit Can someone review?

From: "Sumantro Mukherjee" <sumukher(a)redhat.com&gt; To: "Paul W. Frields" <stickster(a)gmail.com&gt; Cc: "Fedora Magazine mailing list" <magazine(a)lists.fedoraproject.org&gt; Sent: Friday, April 28, 2017 3:14:56 PM Subject: [magazine] Re: [Request to Review] Automating lights with PIR motion sensor , Arduino with Fedora ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Paul W. Frields" <stickster(a)gmail.com&gt; > To: "Sumantro Mukherjee" <sumukher(a)redhat.com&gt; > Cc: "Fedora Magazine mailing list" <magazine(a)lists.fedoraproject.org&gt; > Sent: Friday, April 28, 2017 3:12:08 AM > Subject: [magazine] Re: [Request to Review] Automating lights with PIR > motion sensor , Arduino with Fedora > > On Mon, Apr 24, 2017 at 08:07:33AM -0400, Sumantro Mukherjee wrote: > > Hey All, > > > > I have drafted a small article on how to automate lights with PIR sensor > > and Arduino with Fedora > > > > https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/post.php?post=17213&action=edit > > > > Can someone review? > > Sumantro, please review the workflow: > https://fedoramagazine.org/writing-an-article-for-the-fedora-magazine/ > > We discussed this article in the Magazine editorial meeting tonight > and love the idea. However, we feel it could benefit from more work. > > (1) screenshot should be from the OS and not a camera > (2) process is a bit scarce, could maybe use more explanation and > detail > > Are you still inclined to work on this article? > yes, I have worked a bit more and added some more clarity to the process. Can you please have a look ? Thanks Sumantro