On 03/24/2014 02:41 PM, Tomáš Smetana wrote:
Hi,
I have copied and formatted Russ' QuickStart here:
http://www.openlmi.org/node/62
It should be less verbose and more up-to-date. Please review the new text and
once I stop receiving complaints and update requests I'll replace the old
QuickStart with this one.
It looks much better than the older one. Just few remarks:
- A link to generic overview (with a picture!) would be helpful.
- Write somewhere that's Fedora-specific guide, other distros may vary.
- "You may need to set SELinux to permissive mode" - it should be
possible to run OpenLMI in enforcing now. And it's bug if it is not. So,
just mention that OpenLMI works well with SELinux and common precautions
should be made when something does not work and SELinux logs should be
checked (and bugs reported).
- Some markup around 'pegasus' user and 'passwd pegasus' commands etc
would be nice, now it's hard to read what's command and what's explanation.
- "configuring OpenPegasus to use other users is beyond the scope of
this article" - a link to a detailed guide would be helpful. Perhaps
/usr/share/doc/tog-pegasus/Admin_Guide_Release.pdf and
/usr/share/doc/tog-pegasus/README.RedHat.Security?
- "For OpenLMI to work correctly you need to assign a unique name to
each server ...." -> "unique *host* name"
Good work!
Jan