Re: New QuickStart guide
On Mon, 24 Mar 2014 15:19:19 +0100
Jan Safranek <jsafrane(a)redhat.com> wrote:
On 03/24/2014 02:41 PM, Tomáš Smetana wrote:
> Hi,
> I have copied and formatted Russ' QuickStart here:
> http://www.openlmi.org/node/62
>
> It should be less verbose and more up-to-date. Please review the new text
> and once I stop receiving complaints and update requests I'll replace the
> old QuickStart with this one.
It looks much better than the older one. Just few remarks:
- A link to generic overview (with a picture!) would be helpful.
Yes. We don't have a nice picture though...
- Write somewhere that's Fedora-specific guide, other distros may
vary.
Added as the first sentence to the article.
- "You may need to set SELinux to permissive mode" - it
should be
possible to run OpenLMI in enforcing now. And it's bug if it is not. So,
just mention that OpenLMI works well with SELinux and common precautions
should be made when something does not work and SELinux logs should be
checked (and bugs reported).
OK.
- Some markup around 'pegasus' user and 'passwd
pegasus' commands etc
would be nice, now it's hard to read what's command and what's explanation.
OK. I've tried to format that paragraph somehow better...
- "configuring OpenPegasus to use other users is beyond the
scope of
this article" - a link to a detailed guide would be helpful. Perhaps
/usr/share/doc/tog-pegasus/Admin_Guide_Release.pdf and
/usr/share/doc/tog-pegasus/README.RedHat.Security?
I'll find them online and see what I could do.
- "For OpenLMI to work correctly you need to assign a unique
name to
each server ...." -> "unique *host* name"
OK.
The page has been updated with
Thanks and regards,
--
Tomáš Smetana
Platform Engineering, Red Hat