[install-guide] Intro para and minor edits to Installation Source section
by Jack Reed
commit 2853e652d8c0963030723afe35c9659947311b8e
Author: Jack Reed <jreed(a)redhat.com>
Date: Wed Dec 12 16:01:30 2012 +1000
Intro para and minor edits to Installation Source section
en-US/Installation_Source-x86.xml | 45 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---
1 files changed, 41 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Installation_Source-x86.xml b/en-US/Installation_Source-x86.xml
index 5e58536..620efc9 100644
--- a/en-US/Installation_Source-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Installation_Source-x86.xml
@@ -5,7 +5,11 @@
]>
<section id="installation-source-x86">
<title>Installation Source</title>
- <para>
+ <para>
+ Select <guilabel>Installation Source</guilabel> from the Installation Hub.
+ </para>
+
+ <para>
Specify the location you would like to install Fedora from. Choose between an ISO file or a network location.
</para>
@@ -20,8 +24,41 @@
</para>
<para>
- To specify a network location, choose from the following options in the drop-down menu: <guilabel>Closest mirror</guilabel>, <guilabel>http://</guilabel>, <guilabel>https://</guilabel>, <guilabel>ftp://</guilabel>, and <guilabel>nfs</guilabel>.
- </para>
+ To specify a network location, choose from the following options in the drop-down menu:
+ </para>
+
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>
+ <guilabel>Closest mirror</guilabel>
+ </para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para>
+ <guilabel>http://</guilabel>
+ </para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para>
+ <guilabel>https://</guilabel>
+ </para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para>
+ <guilabel>ftp://</guilabel>
+ </para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para>
+ <guilabel>nfs</guilabel>
+ </para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+
<para>
Using your selection as the start of the location URL, type the rest into the address box. (If you selected <guilabel>Closest mirror</guilabel>, an address is not required.)
@@ -44,7 +81,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- Once you have selected your installation source, click <guibutton>Back</guibutton> to return to the Installation Hub.
+ Once you have selected your installation source, click <guibutton>Done</guibutton> to return to the Installation Hub.
</para>
<!-- <figure float="0">
11 years, 4 months
[install-guide] Capitalizing Installation Hub mentions
by Jack Reed
commit b54ec8a18288a59e435b237041bf39c9549a694e
Author: Jack Reed <jreed(a)redhat.com>
Date: Wed Dec 12 16:00:54 2012 +1000
Capitalizing Installation Hub mentions
en-US/Graphical_Installation_install-hub.xml | 10 +++++-----
en-US/Write_changes_to_disk_common-figure-1.xml | 2 +-
2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Graphical_Installation_install-hub.xml b/en-US/Graphical_Installation_install-hub.xml
index 186cdc3..7088a83 100644
--- a/en-US/Graphical_Installation_install-hub.xml
+++ b/en-US/Graphical_Installation_install-hub.xml
@@ -5,20 +5,20 @@
]>
<section id="install-hub-x86">
<title>
- The installation hub
+ The Installation Hub
</title>
<para>
- The installation hub is the central screen for setting up an installation.
+ The Installation Hub is the central screen for setting up an installation.
</para>
<figure float="0">
- <title>The installation hub</title>
+ <title>The Installation Hub</title>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
<imagedata fileref="images/preinstallhub/preinstall_hub.png" format="PNG" width="444" />
</imageobject>
<textobject>
<para>
- Installation hub screen
+ Installation Hub screen
</para>
</textobject>
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
Sections that still require your attention are marked with a warning symbol. If any required work is outstanding, a note at the bottom of the screen warns you that these sections must be completed before you can continue.
</para>
<para>
- Once all required sections are complete, click <guibutton>Begin Installation</guibutton>.
+ Once all required sections are complete, click <guibutton>Begin Installation</guibutton> (refer to <xref linkend="Write_changes_to_disk-x86" />.
</para>
<para>
To cancel the installation, click <guibutton>Quit</guibutton>.
diff --git a/en-US/Write_changes_to_disk_common-figure-1.xml b/en-US/Write_changes_to_disk_common-figure-1.xml
index 17c0ca1..e3d7539 100644
--- a/en-US/Write_changes_to_disk_common-figure-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Write_changes_to_disk_common-figure-1.xml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
</imageobject>
<textobject>
<para>
- When all required items on the installation hub have been attended to, the installation can begin.
+ When all required items on the Installation Hub have been attended to, the installation can begin.
</para>
</textobject>
11 years, 4 months
[install-guide] Passphrase strength info in Encrypt Partitions section
by Jack Reed
commit 2ad437d450a9c858271cf7810345c87774cc5534
Author: Jack Reed <jreed(a)redhat.com>
Date: Wed Dec 12 15:59:45 2012 +1000
Passphrase strength info in Encrypt Partitions section
en-US/Encrypt_common-para-2.xml | 2 +-
1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Encrypt_common-para-2.xml b/en-US/Encrypt_common-para-2.xml
index 1a20d26..44c559c 100644
--- a/en-US/Encrypt_common-para-2.xml
+++ b/en-US/Encrypt_common-para-2.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- Choose a passphrase and type it into each of the two fields in the dialog box. You must provide this passphrase every time that the system boots.
+ Choose a passphrase and type it into each of the two fields in the dialog box. If the passphrase is not strong enough, a warning symbol will appear and you will not be allowed to type in the second field. You must provide this passphrase every time that the system boots.
</para>
11 years, 4 months
[install-guide] New intro paras for Network Configuration section
by Jack Reed
commit 14f8c5538d5c02e85aea96f70ed0a7535979fa93
Author: Jack Reed <jreed(a)redhat.com>
Date: Wed Dec 12 15:59:01 2012 +1000
New intro paras for Network Configuration section
en-US/Netconfig-x86.xml | 8 +++++++-
en-US/Netconfig_common-para-20.xml | 9 +++++++++
en-US/Netconfig_common-para-21.xml | 9 +++++++++
3 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Netconfig-x86.xml b/en-US/Netconfig-x86.xml
index e6a7c0f..53a772a 100644
--- a/en-US/Netconfig-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Netconfig-x86.xml
@@ -15,9 +15,15 @@
<xi:include href="Netconfig_common-indexterm-5.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- end Indexterms -->
- <xi:include href="Netconfig_common-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- <xi:include href="Netconfig_common-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> -->
<!-- Setup prompts you to supply a host name and domain name for this computer, -->
+ <xi:include href="Netconfig_common-para-20.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- Select Network Configuration from the Installation Hub -->
+
+ <xi:include href="Netconfig_common-para-21.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- Detected network connections will be listed in the left-hand pane -->
+
<!-- <xi:include href="Netconfig_common-note-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
Valid Hostnames -->
diff --git a/en-US/Netconfig_common-para-20.xml b/en-US/Netconfig_common-para-20.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..d78a521
--- /dev/null
+++ b/en-US/Netconfig_common-para-20.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,9 @@
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
+<!DOCTYPE para PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
+%BOOK_ENTITIES;
+]>
+<para>
+ Select <guilabel>Network Configuration</guilabel> from the Installation Hub.
+</para>
+
diff --git a/en-US/Netconfig_common-para-21.xml b/en-US/Netconfig_common-para-21.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..789b893
--- /dev/null
+++ b/en-US/Netconfig_common-para-21.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,9 @@
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
+<!DOCTYPE para PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
+%BOOK_ENTITIES;
+]>
+<para>
+ Detected network connections will be listed in the left-hand pane. To read more details about a connection, select it with your mouse and they will appear to the right. To activate or deactivate a network connection, move the switch in the top-right of the screen to either <guilabel>ON</guilabel> or <guilabel>OFF</guilabel>.
+</para>
+
11 years, 4 months
[install-guide] Minor LVM and RAID partitioning edits
by Jack Reed
commit f5dc91cc58a7b535834e8ee84286483dd8cb4aa6
Author: Jack Reed <jreed(a)redhat.com>
Date: Wed Dec 12 15:58:21 2012 +1000
Minor LVM and RAID partitioning edits
en-US/Create_LVM-x86.xml | 4 ++--
en-US/Create_Software_RAID-x86.xml | 7 +++++--
2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Create_LVM-x86.xml b/en-US/Create_LVM-x86.xml
index 1d4ddd1..f7cdc1e 100644
--- a/en-US/Create_LVM-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Create_LVM-x86.xml
@@ -46,13 +46,13 @@
<step>
<para>
- An additional dropdown menu will appear: <guilabel>Volume Group</guilabel>. The menu will display a newly-created volume group name. Either click the menu and select <guilabel>Create a new volume group</guilabel> or click <guibutton>Modify</guibutton> to configure the newly-created volume group.
+ An additional dropdown menu will appear: <guilabel>Volume Group</guilabel>. The menu will display a newly-created volume group name. Either click the menu and select <guilabel>Create a new volume group</guilabel> or click <guibutton>Modify</guibutton> to configure the newly-created volume group, if you need to. If you are happy to accept the volume group the installer has created, skip to step 5.
</para>
</step>
<step>
<para>
- Each option will lead to the <guilabel>Configure Volume Group</guilabel> dialog, where you can rename the logical volume group and select which disks will be included. Click <guibutton>Save</guibutton> when the group is configured.
+ Both <guilabel>Create a new volume group</guilabel> and <guibutton>Modify</guibutton> lead to the <guilabel>Configure Volume Group</guilabel> dialog, where you can rename the logical volume group and select which disks will be included. Click <guibutton>Save</guibutton> when the group is configured.
</para>
</step>
diff --git a/en-US/Create_Software_RAID-x86.xml b/en-US/Create_Software_RAID-x86.xml
index 576cb36..de77f3a 100644
--- a/en-US/Create_Software_RAID-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Create_Software_RAID-x86.xml
@@ -86,13 +86,16 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- While keeping the partition selected in the left-hand pane, select the configuration button below the pane to choose which disks will be included in the RAID device. If fewer disks are included than the specified RAID level needs, you will be informed that the device could not be created.
+ While keeping the partition selected in the left-hand pane, select the configuration button below the pane to choose which disks will be included in the RAID device.
+ </para>
+ <para>
+ If fewer disks are included than the specified RAID level needs, a yellow notification bar at the bottom of the screen will inform you that <guilabel>Device reconfiguration failed</guilabel>. Clicking this warning prompts a dialog informing you how many disks are required.
</para>
</step>
<step>
<para>
- Click <guibutton>Apply Changes</guibutton> to save your changes, and either continue with another partition or click <guibutton>Finish Partitioning</guibutton> to return to the Installation Hub.
+ Click <guibutton>Apply Changes</guibutton> to save your changes, and either continue with another partition or click <guibutton>Finish Partitioning</guibutton> to return to the Installation Hub.
</para>
</step>
11 years, 4 months
[install-guide] Minor edits, corrections, and updates to partitioning sections
by Jack Reed
commit 7191acc20e6d4542d082d8f997828d0bef8c76b4
Author: Jack Reed <jreed(a)redhat.com>
Date: Wed Dec 12 15:57:35 2012 +1000
Minor edits, corrections, and updates to partitioning sections
en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-list-1.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-2.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-7.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-8.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-9.xml | 9 +++++++++
.../Automatic_Partitioning_x86_ppc-tip-para-3.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml | 2 +-
.../Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-important-1.xml | 2 +-
8 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-list-1.xml b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-list-1.xml
index 1cca27d..2f1ef07 100644
--- a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-list-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-list-1.xml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- <guilabel>BTRFS</guilabel>
+ <guilabel>BTRFS</guilabel> (B-Tree File System, as described in <xref linkend="s3-diskpartitioning-file-x86" />
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
diff --git a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-2.xml b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-2.xml
index 708e849..3b711bb 100644
--- a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-2.xml
+++ b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-2.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- Choose the hard drive you want to install Fedora on by clicking its image from the graphical pane at the top of the screen. Each drive is marked with its label and size.
+ Choose the disks to install Fedora on by clicking their graphical representations from the pane at the top of the screen. Each drive is marked with its label and size.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-7.xml b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-7.xml
index 76db076..b388bc6 100644
--- a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-7.xml
+++ b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-7.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- To partition the drive manually, select <guilabel>Let me customize the partitioning of the disks instead</guilabel>.
+ To partition the drive manually, check the box labeled <guilabel>Let me customize the partitioning of the disks instead</guilabel>.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-8.xml b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-8.xml
index a6727ce..55536a6 100644
--- a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-8.xml
+++ b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-8.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- Click <guibutton>Continue</guibutton> to proceed. If you chose to partition the hard drive manually, you will be directed to <guilabel>Manual Partitioning</guilabel>, which is addressed in <xref linkend="s1-diskpartitioning-x86" />. If you chose automatic partitioning, you will be returned to the Installation Hub.
+ Click <guibutton>Continue</guibutton> to proceed. If you chose to encrypt the partitions, you will now be prompted to create a passphrase (refer to <xref linkend="encrypt-x86" />. If you chose to partition the disks manually, you will be directed to <guilabel>Manual Partitioning</guilabel>, which is addressed in <xref linkend="s1-diskpartitioning-x86" />. If you chose automatic partitioning, you will be returned to the Installation Hub.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-9.xml b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-9.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..e7fe24b
--- /dev/null
+++ b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-9.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,9 @@
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
+<!DOCTYPE para PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
+%BOOK_ENTITIES;
+]>
+<para>
+ To change which drive will serve as the boot device or to decline installation of a bootloader, click <guilabel>Full disk summary and options</guilabel> (refer to <xref linkend="s1-x86-bootloader" />).
+</para>
+
diff --git a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_x86_ppc-tip-para-3.xml b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_x86_ppc-tip-para-3.xml
index 699389d..0afe942 100644
--- a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_x86_ppc-tip-para-3.xml
+++ b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_x86_ppc-tip-para-3.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- If you have chosen to automatically partition your system, you should select <guilabel>Review</guilabel> and manually edit your <filename>/boot/</filename> partition.
+ If you have chosen to automatically partition your system, you should manually edit your <filename>/boot/</filename> partition (refer to <xref linkend="s1-diskpartitioning-x86" />.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml
index 5de1109..e188f9f 100644
--- a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
<!-- If you have chosen to automatically partition your system ... -->
</important>
<para>
- Select <guilabel>Installation Destination</guilabel> from the Installation Hub to choose which hard drive to install Fedora on and to partition the drive.
+ Select <guilabel>Installation Destination</guilabel> from the Installation Hub to select and partition the disks Fedora will be installed on.
</para>
<para>
Partitioning allows you to divide your hard drive into isolated sections, where each section behaves as its own hard drive. Partitioning is particularly useful if you run multiple operating systems. If you are not sure how you want your system to be partitioned, read <xref linkend="ch-partitions-x86" /> for more information.
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-important-1.xml b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-important-1.xml
index 276bcfa..e641e1f 100644
--- a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-important-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-important-1.xml
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
</indexterm>
<para>
- To configure the Fedora boot loader to <firstterm>chain load</firstterm> from a different boot loader, you must specify the boot drive manually. If you chose any of the automatic partitioning options, you must now select the <guilabel>Review and modify partitioning layout</guilabel> option before you click <guibutton>Next</guibutton> or you cannot specify the correct boot drive.
+ To configure the Fedora boot loader to <firstterm>chain load</firstterm> from a different boot loader, you must specify the boot drive manually by selecting <guilabel>Full disk summary and options</guilabel> from the <guilabel>Installation Destination</guilabel> screen. Refer to <xref linkend="s1-x86-bootloader" /> for instructions on specifying a boot drive.
</para>
</important>
11 years, 4 months
[install-guide] Added description of BIOS Boot to file system type list
by Jack Reed
commit 1211df75ddc7d8aefbce662754f494f3df11ddbb
Author: Jack Reed <jreed(a)redhat.com>
Date: Wed Dec 12 12:52:14 2012 +1000
Added description of BIOS Boot to file system type list
...titions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-9.xml | 11 +++++++++++
.../Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-2.xml | 3 ++-
2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-9.xml b/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-9.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..dd9f762
--- /dev/null
+++ b/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-9.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,11 @@
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
+<!DOCTYPE listitem PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
+%BOOK_ENTITIES;
+]>
+<listitem>
+ <para>
+ <guilabel>BIOS Boot</guilabel> — A small partition requiring for booting a device with a GPT/GUID partition table, including disks that have been initialized by the installer.
+ </para>
+</listitem>
+
diff --git a/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-2.xml b/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-2.xml
index a523fa1..61873fe 100644
--- a/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-2.xml
+++ b/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-2.xml
@@ -12,7 +12,8 @@
<xi:include href="Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- ext3 --> <xi:include href="Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- ext2 --> <xi:include href="Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-5.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <!-- swap --> <xi:include href="Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-7.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- swap --> <xi:include href="Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-9.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- BIOS Boot --><xi:include href="Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-7.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- xfs --> <xi:include href="Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-6.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- vfat -->
</itemizedlist>
11 years, 4 months
[install-guide] Expanded description of partition name
by Jack Reed
commit 603eee81a0664115628752ffb6900eb84653be70
Author: Jack Reed <jreed(a)redhat.com>
Date: Wed Dec 12 12:51:24 2012 +1000
Expanded description of partition name
...artitioning_Graphical_common-itemizedlist-1.xml | 2 +-
1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-itemizedlist-1.xml b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-itemizedlist-1.xml
index 0bb36f6..b980bfb 100644
--- a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-itemizedlist-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-itemizedlist-1.xml
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>
- <guilabel>Name</guilabel>: Assign a name to the partition.
+ <guilabel>Name</guilabel>: Assign a name to the partition. Certain partitions will be named automatically when they are created and their name is unavailable for editing, such as a <filename>home</filename> being assigned the name <filename>sda1</filename>. Others can be named arbitrarily.
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
11 years, 4 months
[install-guide] Minor edits and corrections to Adding Partitions section
by Jack Reed
commit c3fab21db46f9de8376ed311cc697d9b325322da
Author: Jack Reed <jreed(a)redhat.com>
Date: Wed Dec 12 11:25:05 2012 +1000
Minor edits and corrections to Adding Partitions section
...titions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-3.xml | 2 +-
...titions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-4.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Adding_Partitions-x86.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Adding_Partitions_common-title-1.xml | 2 +-
4 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-3.xml b/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-3.xml
index 07c3d37..7bdc594 100644
--- a/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-3.xml
+++ b/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-3.xml
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
]>
<listitem>
<para>
- <guilabel>physical volume (LVM)</guilabel> — Creating one or more physical volume (LVM) partitions allows you to create an LVM logical volume. LVM can improve performance when using physical disks. For more information regarding LVM, refer to the <citetitle>Fedora Deployment Guide</citetitle>.
+ <guilabel>physical volume (LVM)</guilabel> — Creating one or more physical volume (LVM) partitions allows you to create an LVM logical volume. LVM can improve performance when using physical disks. To create a RAID device, refer to <xref linkend="Create_LVM-x86" />. For more information regarding LVM, refer to the <citetitle>Fedora Deployment Guide</citetitle>.
</para>
</listitem>
diff --git a/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-4.xml b/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-4.xml
index cef446d..7f1d623 100644
--- a/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-4.xml
+++ b/en-US/Adding_Partitions-section-2-itemizedlist-1-listitem-4.xml
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
]>
<listitem>
<para>
- <guilabel>software RAID</guilabel> — Creating two or more software RAID partitions allows you to create a RAID device. For more information regarding RAID, refer to the chapter <citetitle>RAID (Redundant Array of Independent Disks)</citetitle> in the <citetitle>Fedora Deployment Guide</citetitle>.
+ <guilabel>software RAID</guilabel> — Creating two or more software RAID partitions allows you to create a RAID device. One RAID partition is assigned to each disk on the system. To create a RAID device, refer to <xref linkend="Create_Software_RAID-x86" />. For more information regarding RAID, refer to the chapter <citetitle>RAID (Redundant Array of Independent Disks)</citetitle> in the <citetitle>Fedora Deployment Guide</citetitle>.
</para>
</listitem>
diff --git a/en-US/Adding_Partitions-x86.xml b/en-US/Adding_Partitions-x86.xml
index 5c80e59..f3ab87d 100644
--- a/en-US/Adding_Partitions-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Adding_Partitions-x86.xml
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
<xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- Anaconda displays several details for each device listed --> <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-3.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- To change which drive/s a mount point should be located on --> <para>
- At the bottom of the screen, a link will state how many storage devices were selected in <guilabel>Installation Destination</guilabel> — refer to <xref linkend="s1-diskpartsetup-x86" />. This link opens the <guilabel>Selected Devices</guilabel> dialog, where you can specify which device the bootloader should be installed on. Refer to <xref linkend="s1-x86-bootloader" /> for more information.
+ At the bottom of the screen, a link will state how many storage devices were selected in <guilabel>Installation Destination</guilabel> (refer to <xref linkend="s1-diskpartsetup-x86" />). This link opens the <guilabel>Selected Devices</guilabel> dialog, where you can specify which device the bootloader should be installed on. Refer to <xref linkend="s1-x86-bootloader" /> for more information.
</para>
<!-- <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-4.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> -->
<!-- Using your mouse, click once to highlight a particular field... --> <!-- <xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-variablelist-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> -->
diff --git a/en-US/Adding_Partitions_common-title-1.xml b/en-US/Adding_Partitions_common-title-1.xml
index d8adbe8..eb71421 100644
--- a/en-US/Adding_Partitions_common-title-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Adding_Partitions_common-title-1.xml
@@ -3,5 +3,5 @@
<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
-<title>Adding Partitions</title>
+<title>Adding and Configuring Partitions</title>
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[install-guide] Minor edits and corrections to manual partitioning introductory section
by Jack Reed
commit b33550e9d5fdb726a2a94c0bf81dbbabb5186c5d
Author: Jack Reed <jreed(a)redhat.com>
Date: Wed Dec 12 11:24:30 2012 +1000
Minor edits and corrections to manual partitioning introductory section
...artitioning_Graphical_common-itemizedlist-1.xml | 9 +++++++--
.../Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-10.xml | 2 +-
.../Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-2.xml | 2 +-
.../Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-3.xml | 2 +-
.../Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_x86_ppc-para-1.xml | 2 +-
5 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-itemizedlist-1.xml b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-itemizedlist-1.xml
index e636886..0bb36f6 100644
--- a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-itemizedlist-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-itemizedlist-1.xml
@@ -6,6 +6,11 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>
+ <guilabel>Name</guilabel>: Assign a name to the partition.
+ </para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>
<guilabel>Mount point</guilabel>: Enter the partition's mount point. For example, if this partition should be the root partition, enter <userinput>/</userinput>; enter <userinput>/boot</userinput> for the <filename>/boot</filename> partition, and so on. For a swap partition the mount point should not be set — setting the filesystem type to <literal>swap</literal> is sufficient.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -24,13 +29,13 @@
<listitem>
<para>
- <guilabel>Device Type</guilabel>: Choose between <guilabel>Standard Partition</guilabel>, <guilabel>LVM</guilabel>, and <guilabel>BTRFS</guilabel>. For more information on these options, refer to <xref linkend="s3-diskpartitioning-file-x86" />. Check the adjacent <guilabel>Encrypt</guilabel> box to encrypt the drive. You will be prompted to generate a password later.
+ <guilabel>Device Type</guilabel>: Choose between <guilabel>Standard Partition</guilabel>, <guilabel>LVM</guilabel>, and <guilabel>BTRFS</guilabel>. If two or more disks were selected for partitioning, <guilabel>RAID</guilabel> will also be available. For more information on these options, refer to <xref linkend="s3-diskpartitioning-file-x86" />. Check the adjacent <guilabel>Encrypt</guilabel> box to encrypt the partition. You will be prompted to generate a password later.
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- <guilabel>File System</guilabel>: Using the pull-down menu, select the appropriate file system type for this partition. For more information on file system types, refer to <xref linkend="s3-diskpartitioning-file-x86" />
+ <guilabel>File System</guilabel>: Using the pull-down menu, select the appropriate file system type for this partition. For more information on file system types, refer to <xref linkend="s3-diskpartitioning-file-x86" />. Check the adjacent <guilabel>Reformat</guilabel> box to format an existing partition, or leave it unchecked to retain your data.
</para>
</listitem>
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-10.xml b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-10.xml
index 5ff541c..bd72193 100644
--- a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-10.xml
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-10.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- Adding a partition is a two-step process. You first create the partition at a certain size and specify the mount point. The partition then appears in the left pane, so it is created before being customized. You then customize it using the options in the right pane, where you can choose a device type, file system type, a label, and whether to encrypt the partition. This differs from previous partitioning methods where the partition was created and customized in the same step.
+ Adding a partition is a two-step process. You first create the partition at a certain size and specify the mount point. The partition will appear in the left pane. Next, you customize it using the options in the right pane, where you can choose a name, device type, file system type, label, and whether to encrypt or reformat the partition. This differs from previous partitioning methods where the partition was created and customized in the same step.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-2.xml b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-2.xml
index b193c47..59809c9 100644
--- a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-2.xml
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-2.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- To create the mount points automatically, use your mouse to click the link within the pane that directs you to do so. This will generate a <filename>/boot</filename> partition, a <filename>/</filename> (root) partition, and a swap partition proportionate to the size of the device. These are the recommended partitions for a typical installation (refer to <xref linkend="s2-diskpartrecommend-x86" />), but you can add additional partitions if you need to.
+ If you have no existing partitions and want the system to create the required mount points for you, use your mouse to click the link in the left pane for creating mount points automatically. This will generate a <filename>/boot</filename> partition, a <filename>/</filename> (root) partition, and a swap partition proportionate to the size of the device. These are the recommended partitions for a typical installation (refer to <xref linkend="s2-diskpartrecommend-x86" />), but you can add additional partitions if you need to.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-3.xml b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-3.xml
index f7ec8ca..60bdfd7 100644
--- a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-3.xml
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-3.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- To change which drive/s a mount point should be located on, click the configuration button at the bottom of the pane to open the <guilabel>Configure Mount Point</guilabel> dialog and select one or more devices.
+ To change which devices a non-LVM mount point should be located on, click the configuration button at the bottom of the pane to open the <guilabel>Configure Mount Point</guilabel> dialog. Select one or more devices and click <guibutton>Select</guibutton>.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_x86_ppc-para-1.xml b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_x86_ppc-para-1.xml
index ddfd144..14cb94b 100644
--- a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_x86_ppc-para-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_x86_ppc-para-1.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- The <guilabel>Manual Partitioning</guilabel> screen initially features a single pane on the left for mount points. The total space and available space on the device selected in <xref linkend="s1-diskpartsetup-x86" /> are displayed beneath this pane.
+ The <guilabel>Manual Partitioning</guilabel> screen initially features a single pane on the left for mount points. This will either be empty except for information about creating mount points, or it will display existing partitions that the installer has detected. The total space and available space on the devices selected in <xref linkend="s1-diskpartsetup-x86" /> are displayed beneath this pane.
</para>
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