[install-guide/F21-rewrite] Updating GUI Installation structure
by pbokoc
commit 2fb883cc3f9df8d118405d0a5fc18cf0820c202f
Author: Petr Bokoc <pbokoc(a)redhat.com>
Date: Tue Sep 16 14:06:46 2014 +0200
Updating GUI Installation structure
...{GUI_Begin_Installation.xml => CustomSpoke.xml} | 4 +-
en-US/{GUI_Date_and_Time.xml => DateTimeSpoke.xml} | 0
...I_Installation_Complete.xml => FilterSpoke.xml} | 4 +-
en-US/GUI_Installation_Progress_Screen.xml | 26 --------------------
en-US/Installing_Using_Anaconda.xml | 25 ++++++++++---------
...eyboard_Configuration.xml => KeyboardSpoke.xml} | 0
...I_Language_Support.xml => LangSupportSpoke.xml} | 0
..._Network_Configuration.xml => NetworkSpoke.xml} | 0
...UI_Begin_Installation.xml => PasswordSpoke.xml} | 4 +-
...UI_Software_Selection.xml => SoftwareSpoke.xml} | 0
...GUI_Installation_Source.xml => SourceSpoke.xml} | 0
...orage_and_Partitioning.xml => StorageSpoke.xml} | 0
...GUI_Installation_Summary.xml => SummaryHub.xml} | 0
.../{GUI_Begin_Installation.xml => UserSpoke.xml} | 4 +-
...GUI_Language_Selection.xml => WelcomeSpoke.xml} | 2 +-
15 files changed, 22 insertions(+), 47 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/GUI_Begin_Installation.xml b/en-US/CustomSpoke.xml
similarity index 74%
copy from en-US/GUI_Begin_Installation.xml
copy to en-US/CustomSpoke.xml
index 4cab1c2..7a3b3af 100644
--- a/en-US/GUI_Begin_Installation.xml
+++ b/en-US/CustomSpoke.xml
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
-<section id="sect-installation-gui-begin-install">
- <title>Begin Installation</title>
+<section id="sect-installation-gui-manual-partitioning">
+ <title>Manual Partitioning</title>
<para>
text
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/GUI_Date_and_Time.xml b/en-US/DateTimeSpoke.xml
similarity index 100%
rename from en-US/GUI_Date_and_Time.xml
rename to en-US/DateTimeSpoke.xml
diff --git a/en-US/GUI_Installation_Complete.xml b/en-US/FilterSpoke.xml
similarity index 72%
rename from en-US/GUI_Installation_Complete.xml
rename to en-US/FilterSpoke.xml
index b8a1921..e9a7407 100644
--- a/en-US/GUI_Installation_Complete.xml
+++ b/en-US/FilterSpoke.xml
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
-<section id="sect-installation-gui-installation-complete">
- <title>Installation Complete</title>
+<section id="sect-installation-gui-installation-destination">
+ <title>Installation Destination</title>
<para>
text
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Installing_Using_Anaconda.xml b/en-US/Installing_Using_Anaconda.xml
index 25b64d1..fa7444c 100644
--- a/en-US/Installing_Using_Anaconda.xml
+++ b/en-US/Installing_Using_Anaconda.xml
@@ -58,18 +58,19 @@
text
</para>
- <xi:include href="GUI_Language_Selection.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <xi:include href="GUI_Installation_Summary.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <xi:include href="GUI_Date_and_Time.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <xi:include href="GUI_Keyboard_Configuration.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <xi:include href="GUI_Language_Support.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <xi:include href="GUI_Installation_Source.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <xi:include href="GUI_Software_Selection.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <xi:include href="GUI_Storage_and_Partitioning.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <xi:include href="GUI_Network_Configuration.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <xi:include href="GUI_Begin_Installation.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <xi:include href="GUI_Installation_Progress_Screen.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <xi:include href="GUI_Installation_Complete.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <xi:include href="WelcomeSpoke.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <xi:include href="SummaryHub.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <xi:include href="DateTimeSpoke.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <xi:include href="KeyboardSpoke.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <xi:include href="LangSupportSpoke.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <xi:include href="SourceSpoke.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <xi:include href="SoftwareSpoke.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <xi:include href="StorageSpoke.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <xi:include href="CustomSpoke.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <xi:include href="FilterSpoke.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <xi:include href="NetworkSpoke.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <xi:include href="PasswordSpoke.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <xi:include href="UserSpoke.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
</section>
</chapter>
diff --git a/en-US/GUI_Keyboard_Configuration.xml b/en-US/KeyboardSpoke.xml
similarity index 100%
rename from en-US/GUI_Keyboard_Configuration.xml
rename to en-US/KeyboardSpoke.xml
diff --git a/en-US/GUI_Language_Support.xml b/en-US/LangSupportSpoke.xml
similarity index 100%
rename from en-US/GUI_Language_Support.xml
rename to en-US/LangSupportSpoke.xml
diff --git a/en-US/GUI_Network_Configuration.xml b/en-US/NetworkSpoke.xml
similarity index 100%
rename from en-US/GUI_Network_Configuration.xml
rename to en-US/NetworkSpoke.xml
diff --git a/en-US/GUI_Begin_Installation.xml b/en-US/PasswordSpoke.xml
similarity index 75%
copy from en-US/GUI_Begin_Installation.xml
copy to en-US/PasswordSpoke.xml
index 4cab1c2..f14433c 100644
--- a/en-US/GUI_Begin_Installation.xml
+++ b/en-US/PasswordSpoke.xml
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
-<section id="sect-installation-gui-begin-install">
- <title>Begin Installation</title>
+<section id="sect-installation-gui-root-password">
+ <title>Create a Root Password</title>
<para>
text
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/GUI_Software_Selection.xml b/en-US/SoftwareSpoke.xml
similarity index 100%
rename from en-US/GUI_Software_Selection.xml
rename to en-US/SoftwareSpoke.xml
diff --git a/en-US/GUI_Installation_Source.xml b/en-US/SourceSpoke.xml
similarity index 100%
rename from en-US/GUI_Installation_Source.xml
rename to en-US/SourceSpoke.xml
diff --git a/en-US/GUI_Storage_and_Partitioning.xml b/en-US/StorageSpoke.xml
similarity index 100%
rename from en-US/GUI_Storage_and_Partitioning.xml
rename to en-US/StorageSpoke.xml
diff --git a/en-US/GUI_Installation_Summary.xml b/en-US/SummaryHub.xml
similarity index 100%
rename from en-US/GUI_Installation_Summary.xml
rename to en-US/SummaryHub.xml
diff --git a/en-US/GUI_Begin_Installation.xml b/en-US/UserSpoke.xml
similarity index 76%
rename from en-US/GUI_Begin_Installation.xml
rename to en-US/UserSpoke.xml
index 4cab1c2..106c818 100644
--- a/en-US/GUI_Begin_Installation.xml
+++ b/en-US/UserSpoke.xml
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
-<section id="sect-installation-gui-begin-install">
- <title>Begin Installation</title>
+<section id="sect-installation-gui-create-user">
+ <title>Create a User</title>
<para>
text
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/GUI_Language_Selection.xml b/en-US/WelcomeSpoke.xml
similarity index 84%
rename from en-US/GUI_Language_Selection.xml
rename to en-US/WelcomeSpoke.xml
index d81d1a5..70255d3 100644
--- a/en-US/GUI_Language_Selection.xml
+++ b/en-US/WelcomeSpoke.xml
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
-<section id="sect-installation-gui-language-selectiong">
+<section id="sect-installation-gui-language-selection">
<title>Language Selection</title>
<para>
text
9 years, 7 months
[release-notes] Created tag 21.06
by Pete Travis
The signed tag '21.06' was created.
Tagger: Pete Travis <immanetize(a)fedoraproject.org>
Date: Mon Sep 15 22:27:37 2014 -0600
prerelease draft with improved desktop file that works
Changes since the last tag '21.05':
Pete Travis (1):
desktop-file-validate is a good tool, use it
9 years, 7 months
[release-notes] desktop-file-validate is a good tool, use it
by Pete Travis
commit 6e8cfc373a55cff383d9b779fb501ec998803666
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize(a)fedoraproject.org>
Date: Mon Sep 15 22:27:08 2014 -0600
desktop-file-validate is a good tool, use it
build/fedora-release-notes.desktop | 2 +-
1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/build/fedora-release-notes.desktop b/build/fedora-release-notes.desktop
index 8f855fe..6dbac68 100644
--- a/build/fedora-release-notes.desktop
+++ b/build/fedora-release-notes.desktop
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@ Categories=System;Documentation;
GenericName=Release Notes
Type=Application
X-Desktop-File-Install-Version=0.22
-Exec=sh -c "PROFILEDIR=\"\$HOME/.config/epiphany/fedora-release-notes\";DOC="/usr/share/doc/fedora-release-notes/index.html"; [ -d \$PROFILEDIR ] || mkdir \$PROFILEDIR;epiphany --application-mode --profile=\$PROFILEDIR $DOC || xdg-open $DOC
+Exec=sh -c "PROFILEDIR=\"\$HOME/.config/epiphany/fedora-release-notes\";DOC="/usr/share/doc/fedora-release-notes/index.html"; [ -d \$PROFILEDIR ] || mkdir \$PROFILEDIR;epiphany --application-mode --profile=\$PROFILEDIR \$DOC || xdg-open \$DOC "
Icon=fedora-release-notes
9 years, 7 months
[release-notes] Created tag 21.05
by Pete Travis
The signed tag '21.05' was created.
Tagger: Pete Travis <immanetize(a)fedoraproject.org>
Date: Mon Sep 15 22:10:51 2014 -0600
prerelease draft with improved desktop file
Changes since the last tag '21.04':
Pete Travis (3):
updating launch path in desktop file
if you have the repo on more than one machine, commits are still important
fix webapp.desktop path, and fall back to default html handler if gnome w/o epiphany
9 years, 7 months
[release-notes: 3/3] fix webapp.desktop path, and fall back to default html handler if gnome w/o epiphany
by Pete Travis
commit bfbd1a21d5e8043b267735a93b5a22ab2b54bdc8
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize(a)fedoraproject.org>
Date: Mon Sep 15 22:08:45 2014 -0600
fix webapp.desktop path, and fall back to default html handler if gnome w/o epiphany
build/fedora-release-notes.desktop | 2 +-
1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/build/fedora-release-notes.desktop b/build/fedora-release-notes.desktop
index a677082..8f855fe 100644
--- a/build/fedora-release-notes.desktop
+++ b/build/fedora-release-notes.desktop
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@ Categories=System;Documentation;
GenericName=Release Notes
Type=Application
X-Desktop-File-Install-Version=0.22
-Exec=sh -c "PROFILEDIR=\"\$HOME/.config/epiphany/fedora-release-notes\";[ -d \$PROFILEDIR ] || mkdir \$PROFILEDIR;epiphany --application-mode --profile=\$PROFILEDIR /usr/share/doc/fedora-release-notes/index.html"
+Exec=sh -c "PROFILEDIR=\"\$HOME/.config/epiphany/fedora-release-notes\";DOC="/usr/share/doc/fedora-release-notes/index.html"; [ -d \$PROFILEDIR ] || mkdir \$PROFILEDIR;epiphany --application-mode --profile=\$PROFILEDIR $DOC || xdg-open $DOC
Icon=fedora-release-notes
9 years, 7 months
[release-notes: 1/3] updating launch path in desktop file
by Pete Travis
commit fba02ce73295785304b7434a58c2df3934c22606
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize(a)fedoraproject.org>
Date: Sun Aug 31 13:10:16 2014 -0600
updating launch path in desktop file
build/fedora-release-notes.desktop | 2 +-
1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/build/fedora-release-notes.desktop b/build/fedora-release-notes.desktop
index fb3244c..a677082 100644
--- a/build/fedora-release-notes.desktop
+++ b/build/fedora-release-notes.desktop
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@ Categories=System;Documentation;
GenericName=Release Notes
Type=Application
X-Desktop-File-Install-Version=0.22
-Exec=sh -c "PROFILEDIR=\"\$HOME/.config/epiphany/fedora-release-notes\";[ -d \$PROFILEDIR ] || mkdir \$PROFILEDIR;epiphany --application-mode --profile=\$PROFILEDIR /home/pete/fedora-docs/release-notes/tmp/en-US/html-single/index.html"
+Exec=sh -c "PROFILEDIR=\"\$HOME/.config/epiphany/fedora-release-notes\";[ -d \$PROFILEDIR ] || mkdir \$PROFILEDIR;epiphany --application-mode --profile=\$PROFILEDIR /usr/share/doc/fedora-release-notes/index.html"
Icon=fedora-release-notes
9 years, 7 months
[install-guide/F21-rewrite] Added advanced partitioning example to Kickstart Syntax Reference
by pbokoc
commit a1457ddf1db634f9821f8f3987c5682b08ad5602
Author: Petr Bokoc <pbokoc(a)redhat.com>
Date: Tue Sep 16 00:25:07 2014 +0200
Added advanced partitioning example to Kickstart Syntax Reference
en-US/Kickstart_Syntax_Reference.xml | 62 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++----
1 files changed, 54 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Kickstart_Syntax_Reference.xml b/en-US/Kickstart_Syntax_Reference.xml
index 2cd7cb0..eaba6fb 100644
--- a/en-US/Kickstart_Syntax_Reference.xml
+++ b/en-US/Kickstart_Syntax_Reference.xml
@@ -450,15 +450,61 @@
</section>
<section id="sect-kickstart-examples">
- <title>Example Kickstart Configurations</title>
+ <title>Example Kickstart Configurations</title>
- <section id="sect-kickstart-partitioning-example">
- <title>Advanced Partitioning Example</title>
- <para>
- text
- </para>
- </section>
+ <section id="sect-kickstart-partitioning-example">
+ <title>Advanced Partitioning Example</title>
+ <para>
+ The following is an integrated example showing the <command>clearpart</command>, <command>zerombr</command>, <command>part</command>, <command>raid</command>, <command>volgroup</command>, and <command>logvol</command> Kickstart options in action:
+ </para>
+ <example>
+ <title>Advanced Partitioning Example</title>
+ <programlisting>
+<command>clearpart --drives=hda,hdc</command>
+<command>zerombr</command>
+# Raid 1 IDE config
+<command>part raid.11 --size 1000 --asprimary --ondrive=hda</command>
+<command>part raid.12 --size 1000 --asprimary --ondrive=hda</command>
+<command>part raid.13 --size 2000 --asprimary --ondrive=hda</command>
+<command>part raid.14 --size 8000 --ondrive=hda</command>
+<command>part raid.15 --size 16384 --grow --ondrive=hda</command>
+<command>part raid.21 --size 1000 --asprimary --ondrive=hdc</command>
+<command>part raid.22 --size 1000 --asprimary --ondrive=hdc</command>
+<command>part raid.23 --size 2000 --asprimary --ondrive=hdc</command>
+<command>part raid.24 --size 8000 --ondrive=hdc</command>
+<command>part raid.25 --size 16384 --grow --ondrive=hdc</command>
- </section>
+# You can add --spares=x
+<command>raid / --fstype xfs --device root --level=RAID1 raid.11 raid.21</command>
+<command>raid /safe --fstype xfs --device safe --level=RAID1 raid.12 raid.22</command>
+<command>raid swap --fstype swap --device swap --level=RAID1 raid.13 raid.23</command>
+<command>raid /usr --fstype xfs --device usr --level=RAID1 raid.14 raid.24</command>
+<command>raid pv.01 --fstype xfs --device pv.01 --level=RAID1 raid.15 raid.25</command>
+
+# LVM configuration so that we can resize /var and /usr/local later
+<command>volgroup sysvg pv.01</command>
+<command>logvol /var --vgname=sysvg --size=8000 --name=var</command>
+<command>logvol /var/freespace --vgname=sysvg --size=8000 --name=freespacetouse</command>
+<command>logvol /usr/local --vgname=sysvg --size=1 --grow --name=usrlocal</command>
+ </programlisting>
+ <para>
+ This advanced example implements LVM over RAID, as well as the ability to resize various directories for future growth.
+ </para>
+ <para>
+ First, the <command>clearpart</command> command is used on drives <systemitem>hda</systemitem> and <systemitem>hdc</systemitem> to wipe them. The <command>zerombr</command> command initializes unused partition tables.
+ </para>
+ <para>
+ Then, the two drives are partitioned to prepare them for RAID configuration. Each drive is divided into five partitions, and each drive is partitioned into an identical layout.
+ </para>
+ <para>
+ The next part uses these pairs of physical partitions to create a software RAID device with RAID1 level (mirroring). The first four RAID devices are used for <filename>/</filename> (root), <filename>/safe</filename>, <systemitem>swap</systemitem> and <filename>/usr</filename>. The fifth, largest pair of partitions is named <literal>pv.01</literal> and will be used in the following part as a physical volume for LVM.
+ </para>
+ <para>
+ Finally, the last set of commands first creates a volume group named <literal>sysvg</literal> on the <literal>pv.01</literal> physical volume. Then, three logical volumes (<literal>/var</literal>, <literal>/var/freespace</literal> and <literal>/usr/local</literal>) are created and added to the <literal>sysvg</literal> volume group. The <literal>/var</literal> and <literal>/var/freespace</literal> volumes have a set size of 8 GB, and the <literal>/usr/local</literal> volume uses the <option>--grow</option> option to fill all remaining available space.
+ </para>
+ </example>
+ </section>
+
+ </section>
</appendix>
\ No newline at end of file
9 years, 7 months
[install-guide/F21-rewrite] Bringing links to other guides into line
by pbokoc
commit aa6f7ee552c9e37fa49b4146b2523ad407fd5852
Author: Petr Bokoc <pbokoc(a)redhat.com>
Date: Tue Sep 16 00:19:31 2014 +0200
Bringing links to other guides into line
en-US/Introduction.xml | 16 ++++++++--------
en-US/Network_based_Installations.xml | 4 ++--
en-US/Troubleshooting.xml | 8 ++++----
en-US/VNC_Installations.xml | 2 +-
4 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Introduction.xml b/en-US/Introduction.xml
index 57b239e..928d582 100644
--- a/en-US/Introduction.xml
+++ b/en-US/Introduction.xml
@@ -18,14 +18,14 @@
<section id="sect-introduction-about">
<title>About Fedora</title>
<para>
- To find out more about Fedora, visit the <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/">Fedora Project Website</ulink>. Other documentation describing additional topics related to Fedora is available at the <ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/">Fedora Documentation</ulink> website. Also see the <ulink url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_Project_Wiki">Fedora Project Wiki</ulink>.
+ To find out more about &PRODUCT;, visit the <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/">&PRODUCT; Project Website</ulink>. Other documentation describing additional topics related to &PRODUCT; is available at <ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/">&PRODUCT; Documentation</ulink>. Also see the <ulink url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_Project_Wiki">&PRODUCT; Project Wiki</ulink>.
</para>
</section>
<section id="sect-introduction-additional-help">
<title>Getting Additional Help</title>
<para>
- If you encounter any problems which are not described in documentation, you might get help from members of the community - developers, users, and others. There are many ways to get help - the Ask Fedora website, mailing lists, forums, or IRC; for a summary of available resources, see the <ulink url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Communicating_and_getting_help">Communicating and Getting Help</ulink> page on the Fedora wiki.
+ If you encounter any problems which are not described in documentation, you might get help from members of the community - developers, users, and others. There are many ways to get help: the Ask Fedora website, mailing lists, forums, or IRC. For a summary of available resources, see the <ulink url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Communicating_and_getting_help">Communicating and Getting Help</ulink> page on the &PRODUCT; wiki.
</para>
</section>
@@ -42,28 +42,28 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>
- Understand how to locate the Fedora distribution online
+ Understand how to locate the &PRODUCT; distribution online
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- Create configuration data that allows a computer to boot Fedora
+ Create configuration data that allows a computer to boot &PRODUCT;
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- Understand and interact with the Fedora installation program
+ Understand and interact with the &PRODUCT; installation program
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- Complete basic post-installation configuration of a Fedora system
+ Complete basic post-installation configuration of a &PRODUCT; system
</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
<note>
<para>
- This guide does not cover <emphasis>use</emphasis> of Fedora. To learn how to use an installed Fedora system, see the other manuals available at the <ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/">Fedora Documentation</ulink> website.
+ This guide does not cover <emphasis>use</emphasis> of &PRODUCT;. To learn how to use an installed &PRODUCT; system, see the other manuals available at <ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/">Fedora Documentation</ulink>.
</para>
</note>
</section>
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
<section id="sect-introduction-target-audience">
<title>Target Audience</title>
<para>
- This guide is intended for Fedora users of all levels of experience. However, it describes the installation process and its many options in far greater detail than most users are likely to require. You do not need to read and understand this entire document to install Fedora on a computer. This document is most likely to help experienced users perform advanced and unusual installations.
+ This guide is intended for &PRODUCT; users of all levels of experience. However, it describes the installation process and its many options in far greater detail than most users are likely to require. You do not need to read and understand this entire document to install &PRODUCT; on a computer. This document is most likely to help experienced users perform advanced and unusual installations.
</para>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/Network_based_Installations.xml b/en-US/Network_based_Installations.xml
index da789f0..f4dc714 100644
--- a/en-US/Network_based_Installations.xml
+++ b/en-US/Network_based_Installations.xml
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
<section id="pxe-overview">
<title>PXE Installation Overview</title>
<para>
- Pre-Execution Environment, or PXE, is a techonology that allows computers to boot directly from resources provided over the network. Installing Fedora over the network means you don't have to create media, and you can install to multiple computers or virtual machine simultaneously. The process involves a number of components and features working together to provide the resources required.
+ Preboot Execution Environment, or PXE, is a techonology that allows computers to boot directly from resources provided over the network. Installing Fedora over the network means you don't have to create media, and you can install to multiple computers or virtual machine simultaneously. The process involves a number of components and features working together to provide the resources required.
</para>
<formalpara>
<title>PXE-capable computer</title>
@@ -305,7 +305,7 @@ menuentry 'Rescue installed system' --class fedora --class gnu-linux --class gn
The examples in this section use the public Fedora mirrors as the package source. For faster installations, installing to many systems, or more isolated environments, you may wish to maintain a local repository.
</para>
<para>
- Fedora Infrastructure maintains instructions for a configuring a local mirror at <ulink url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Infrastructure/Mirroring" />. The preferred method for providing repositories is via HTTP, and you can refer to the Fedora <citetitle>System Adminsitrators Guide</citetitle> for Fedora &PRODVER; to configure <systemitem class="daemon">httpd</systemitem>.
+ Fedora Infrastructure maintains instructions for a configuring a local mirror at <ulink url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Infrastructure/Mirroring" />. The preferred method for providing repositories is via HTTP, and you can refer to the <citetitle>Fedora System Administrator's Guide</citetitle>, available at <ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">Fedora Documentation</ulink>, to configure <systemitem class="daemon">httpd</systemitem>.
</para>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/Troubleshooting.xml b/en-US/Troubleshooting.xml
index 21531c7..eb41d2e 100644
--- a/en-US/Troubleshooting.xml
+++ b/en-US/Troubleshooting.xml
@@ -585,7 +585,7 @@ GRUB_CMDLINE_LINUX="rd.lvm.lv=rhel/root rd.md=0 rd.dm=0 vconsole.keymap=us $([ -
After you finish this procedure, you can reboot your computer. &PRODUCT; will not use the graphical boot sequence any more. If you wish to enable graphical boot, follow the same procedure, add the <literal>rhgb</literal> option to the <literal>GRUB_CMDLINE_LINUX</literal> line in the <filename>/etc/default/grub</filename> file and refresh the boot loader configuration again using the <command>grub2-mkconfig</command> command.
</para>
<para>
- See the <citetitle>&PRODUCT; System Administrator's Guide</citetitle>, available at the <ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">Fedora Documentation website</ulink>, for more information about working with the <application>GRUB2</application> boot loader.
+ See the <citetitle>&PRODUCT; System Administrator's Guide</citetitle>, available at <ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">&PRODUCT; Documentation</ulink>, for more information about working with the <application>GRUB2</application> boot loader.
</para>
</section>
@@ -620,7 +620,7 @@ GRUB_CMDLINE_LINUX="rd.lvm.lv=rhel/root rd.md=0 rd.dm=0 vconsole.keymap=us $([ -
<prompt>#</prompt> <command>systemctl set-default multi-user.target</command>
</screen>
<para>
- For more information about targets in <application>systemd</application>, see the <citetitle>&PRODUCT; System Administrator's Guide</citetitle>, available at the <ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">Fedora Documentation website</ulink>.
+ For more information about targets in <application>systemd</application>, see the <citetitle>&PRODUCT; System Administrator's Guide</citetitle>, available at <ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">&PRODUCT; Documentation</ulink>.
</para>
</section>
@@ -677,7 +677,7 @@ tmpfs 1.8G 2.6M 1.8G 1% /tmp
Some hardware configurations have a part of the system's RAM reserved and unavailable to the main system. Notably, laptop computers with integrated graphics cards will reserve some memory for the GPU. For example, a laptop with 4 GB of RAM and an integrated Intel graphics card will show only roughly 3.7 GB of available memory, even with a 64-bit system.
</para>
<para>
- Additionally, the <application>kdump</application> crash kernel dumping mechanism reserves some memory for the secondary kernel used in case of the primary kernel crashing. This reserved memory will also not be displayed as available when using the <command>free</command> command. For details about <application>kdump</application> and its memory requirements, see the <citetitle>&PRODUCT; System Administrator's Guide</citetitle>, available at the <ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">Fedora Documentation website</ulink>.
+ Additionally, the <application>kdump</application> crash kernel dumping mechanism reserves some memory for the secondary kernel used in case of the primary kernel crashing. This reserved memory will also not be displayed as available when using the <command>free</command> command. For details about <application>kdump</application> and its memory requirements, see the <citetitle>&PRODUCT; System Administrator's Guide</citetitle>, available at <ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">&PRODUCT; Documentation</ulink>.
</para>
</note>
<para>
@@ -744,7 +744,7 @@ GRUB_CMDLINE_LINUX="rd.lvm.lv=rhel/root vconsole.font=latarcyrheb-sun16 rd.lvm.l
GRUB_DISABLE_RECOVERY="true"
</programlisting>
<para>
- See the <citetitle>&PRODUCT; System Administrator's Guide</citetitle>, available at the <ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">Fedora Documentation website</ulink>, for more information about working with the <application>GRUB2</application> boot loader.
+ See the <citetitle>&PRODUCT; System Administrator's Guide</citetitle>, available at <ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">&PRODUCT; Documentation</ulink>, for more information about working with the <application>GRUB2</application> boot loader.
</para>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/VNC_Installations.xml b/en-US/VNC_Installations.xml
index 75adc01..7178b9f 100644
--- a/en-US/VNC_Installations.xml
+++ b/en-US/VNC_Installations.xml
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@
<section id="sect-vnc-installations-connect-mode">
<title>Installing in VNC Connect Mode</title>
<para>
- VNC connect mode is when the system being installed initiates a connection to the VNC viewer running on a remote system. Before you start, make sure the remote system is configured to accept incoming connection on the port you want to use for VNC. The exact way to make sure the connection will not be blocked depends on your network and on your workstation's configuration. Information about configuring the firewall in &PRODUCT; is available in the <citetitle>&PRODUCT; Security Guide</citetitle>, available at the <ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">&PRODUCT; Documentation website</ulink>.
+ VNC connect mode is when the system being installed initiates a connection to the VNC viewer running on a remote system. Before you start, make sure the remote system is configured to accept incoming connection on the port you want to use for VNC. The exact way to make sure the connection will not be blocked depends on your network and on your workstation's configuration. Information about configuring the firewall in &PRODUCT; is available in the <citetitle>&PRODUCT; Security Guide</citetitle>, available at <ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">&PRODUCT; Documentation</ulink>.
</para>
<procedure id="proc-vnc-installations-connect-mode">
<title>Starting VNC in Connect Mode</title>
9 years, 7 months