commit 753460cf8ad8898b5fd0f68e107d61d0e7b1303b
Author: Jack Reed <jreed(a)redhat.com>
Date: Wed Dec 12 16:02:09 2012 +1000
Intro para and minor edits for Software Selection section
en-US/Package_Selection-x86.xml | 3 ++-
en-US/Package_Selection_common-list-1.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-12.xml | 8 ++++++++
3 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Package_Selection-x86.xml b/en-US/Package_Selection-x86.xml
index 6354dd3..4a62f58 100644
--- a/en-US/Package_Selection-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Package_Selection-x86.xml
@@ -28,7 +28,8 @@
</mediaobject>
</figure>
- <xi:include href="Package_Selection_common-para-7.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <xi:include href="Package_Selection_common-para-12.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- To specify which packages Fedora will... --> <xi:include
href="Package_Selection_common-para-7.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- By default, Fedora installs the GNOME... --> <xi:include
href="Package_Selection_common-list-1.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- Graphical Desktops
GNOME Desktop
diff --git a/en-US/Package_Selection_common-list-1.xml
b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-list-1.xml
index acee6e6..27a4c78 100644
--- a/en-US/Package_Selection_common-list-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-list-1.xml
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
</varlistentry> -->
<varlistentry>
- <term>Graphical Desktops (multiple options)</term>
+ <term>Graphical Desktops (multiple options, one radio button each)</term>
<listitem>
<para>
Fedora offers a variety of graphical desktop environments, which can be enhanced with
add-ons such as the <application>LibreOffice</application> productivity suite,
graphical tools such as the <application>GIMP</application>, and multimedia
applications. The available environments are:
diff --git a/en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-12.xml
b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-12.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..d4a0c3b
--- /dev/null
+++ b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-12.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,8 @@
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
+<!DOCTYPE para PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN"
"http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
+%BOOK_ENTITIES;
+]>
+<para>
+ To specify which packages Fedora will install, select <guilabel>Software
Selection</guilabel> from the Installation Hub.
+</para>