commit 786f59ae65958820ecf6d4ef812b23dd258dd3c5
Author: Petr Bokoc <pbokoc(a)redhat.com>
Date: Tue Nov 18 16:34:34 2014 +0100
Fixing various grammar issues in CustomSpoke
en-US/CustomSpoke_AddBtrfs.xml | 12 ++++++------
en-US/CustomSpoke_AddLVM.xml | 8 ++++----
en-US/CustomSpoke_AddPhysical.xml | 2 +-
en-US/CustomSpoke_RecommendedScheme.xml | 2 +-
en-US/CustomSpoke_SoftwareRAID.xml | 4 ++--
5 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddBtrfs.xml b/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddBtrfs.xml
index e753d88..542b1c9 100644
--- a/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddBtrfs.xml
+++ b/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddBtrfs.xml
@@ -9,11 +9,11 @@
<firstterm>Btrfs</firstterm> is a type of file system, but it has
several features characteristic of a storage device. It is designed to make the file
system tolerant of errors, and to facilitate the detection and repair of errors when they
occur. It uses checksums to ensure the validity of data and metadata, and maintains
snapshots of the file system that can be used for backup or repair.
</para>
<para>
- Creating a Btrfs layout is somewhat similar to LVM (described in <xref
linkend="sect-installation-gui-manual-partitioning-lvm" />) with slightly
different terminology. A Btrfs <firstterm>volume</firstterm> is the equivalent
of a LVM volume group, and a Btrfs <firstterm>subvolume</firstterm> is similar
to a LVM logical volume. An important difference to note is how
<application>Anaconda</application> reports sizes of separate mount points:
For LVM, the exact size of each logical volume is shown next to each mount point in the
left pane, while with Btrfs, the total size of the entire volume is shown next to each
subvolume.
+ Creating a Btrfs layout is somewhat similar to LVM (described in <xref
linkend="sect-installation-gui-manual-partitioning-lvm" />) with slightly
different terminology. A Btrfs <firstterm>volume</firstterm> is the equivalent
of an LVM volume group, and a Btrfs <firstterm>subvolume</firstterm> is
similar to a LVM logical volume. An important difference to note is how
<application>Anaconda</application> reports sizes for separate mount points:
For LVM, the exact size of each logical volume is shown next to each mount point in the
left pane, while with Btrfs, the total size of the entire volume is shown next to each
subvolume.
</para>
<warning>
<para>
- Some partition types - notably the <filename
class="directory">/boot</filename> and <filename
class="directory">/usr</filename> directories and the BIOS Boot and EFI
partitions - can not be placed on Btrfs subvolumes. Use standard physical volumes for them
(or a LVM logical volume for <filename
class="directory">/usr</filename>). See <xref
linkend="sect-installation-gui-manual-partitioning-recommended" /> for more
information.
+ Some partition types - notably the <filename
class="directory">/boot</filename> and <filename
class="directory">/usr</filename> directories and the BIOS Boot and EFI
partitions - can not be placed on Btrfs subvolumes. Use standard physical volumes for them
(or an LVM logical volume for <filename
class="directory">/usr</filename>). See <xref
linkend="sect-installation-gui-manual-partitioning-recommended" /> for more
information.
</para>
</warning>
<para>
@@ -31,11 +31,11 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- In the new dialog window, specify a mount point you want to create a
separate logical volume for - for example, <filename
class="directory">/</filename>. Optionally, specify a size for the
volume using standard units such as MB or GB (for example,
<literal>50GB</literal>). Then, click <guilabel>Add mount
point</guilabel> to add the volume and return to the main partitioning screen.
+ In the new dialog window, specify a mount point for which you want to
create a separate logical volume - for example, <filename
class="directory">/</filename>. Optionally, specify a size for the
volume using standard units such as MB or GB (for example,
<literal>50GB</literal>). Then, click <guilabel>Add mount
point</guilabel> to add the volume and return to the main partitioning screen.
</para>
<note>
<para>
- When creating mount point for swap on Btrfs, specify the mount point
as <literal>swap</literal>.
+ When creating a mount point for swap on Btrfs, specify the mount
point as <literal>swap</literal>.
</para>
</note>
</step>
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
You can also make sure that the volume is encrypted by selecting the
<guilabel>Encrypt</guilabel> option; this will enable LUKS encryption for the
entire volume. See the <citetitle>&PRODUCT; Security Guide</citetitle>,
available at <ulink
url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/" />, for
information about LUKS disk encryption.
</para>
<para>
- Additionally, you can set a fixed size for the volume by selecting the
<guilabel>Fixed</guilabel> option from the <guilabel>Size
policy</guilabel> menu, and entering a size for the volume group.
+ Additionally, you can set a fixed size for the volume by selecting the
<guilabel>Fixed</guilabel> option from the <guilabel>Size
policy</guilabel> menu and entering a size for the volume group.
</para>
<para>
After you finish configuring the Btrfs volume settings, click
<guilabel>Save</guilabel> to return to the main <guilabel>Manual
Partitioning</guilabel> screen.
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- If you need to create more than one Btrfs volume, open the
<guilabel>Volume</guilabel> drop-down menu, and select the
<guilabel>Create a new volume group</guilabel> option. A new dialog window
will open, identical to the one described in the previous step; again, select a name,
storage devices, encryption settings, RAID level and size policy for the new volume, and
click <guilabel>Save</guilabel>. The new volume will then become available in
the <guilabel>Volume Group</guilabel> drop-down menu; you can then go through
your existing mount points and change this setting to assign them to a different volume.
+ If you need to create more than one Btrfs volume, open the
<guilabel>Volume</guilabel> drop-down menu and select the
<guilabel>Create a new volume group</guilabel> option. A new dialog window
will open, identical to the one described in the previous step. Again, select a name,
storage devices, encryption settings, RAID level and size policy for the new volume, and
click <guilabel>Save</guilabel>. The new volume will then become available in
the <guilabel>Volume Group</guilabel> drop-down menu; you can then go through
your existing mount points and change this setting to assign them to a different volume.
</para>
</step>
<step>
diff --git a/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddLVM.xml b/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddLVM.xml
index b61fcd0..f99686f 100644
--- a/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddLVM.xml
+++ b/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddLVM.xml
@@ -31,11 +31,11 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- In the new dialog window, specify a mount point you want to create a
separate logical volume for - for example, <filename
class="directory">/</filename>. Optionally, specify a size for the
volume using standard units such as MB or GB (for example,
<literal>50GB</literal>). Then, click <guilabel>Add mount
point</guilabel> to add the volume and return to the main partitioning screen.
+ In the new dialog window, specify a mount point for which you want to
create a separate logical volume - for example, <filename
class="directory">/</filename>. Optionally, specify a size for the
volume using standard units such as MB or GB (for example,
<literal>50GB</literal>). Then, click <guilabel>Add mount
point</guilabel> to add the volume and return to the main partitioning screen.
</para>
<note>
<para>
- When creating mount point for swap on LVM, specify the mount point as
<literal>swap</literal>.
+ When creating a mount point for swap on LVM, specify the mount point
as <literal>swap</literal>.
</para>
</note>
</step>
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
You can also make sure that the volume group is encrypted by selecting
the <guilabel>Encrypt</guilabel> option; this will enable LUKS encryption for
the entire volume group. See the <citetitle>&PRODUCT; Security
Guide</citetitle>, available at <ulink
url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/" />, for information about LUKS disk
encryption.
</para>
<para>
- Additionally, you can set a fixed size for the volume group by selecting
the <guilabel>Fixed</guilabel> option from the <guilabel>Size
policy</guilabel> menu, and entering a size for the volume group.
+ Additionally, you can set a fixed size for the volume group by selecting
the <guilabel>Fixed</guilabel> option from the <guilabel>Size
policy</guilabel> menu and entering a size for the volume group.
</para>
<para>
After you finish configuring the volume group settings, click
<guilabel>Save</guilabel> to return to the main <guilabel>Manual
Partitioning</guilabel> screen.
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- If you need to create more than one volume group, open the
<guilabel>Volume Group</guilabel> drop-down menu, and select the
<guilabel>Create a new volume group</guilabel> option. A new dialog window
will open, identical to the one described in the previous step; again, select a name,
storage devices, encryption settings, RAID level and size policy for the new group, and
click <guilabel>Save</guilabel>. The new volume group will then become
available in the <guilabel>Volume Group</guilabel> drop-down menu; you can
then go through your existing mount points and change this setting to assign them to a
different volume group.
+ If you need to create more than one volume group, open the
<guilabel>Volume Group</guilabel> drop-down menu and select the
<guilabel>Create a new volume group</guilabel> option. A new dialog window
will open, identical to the one described in the previous step. Again, select a name,
storage devices, encryption settings, RAID level and size policy for the new group, and
click <guilabel>Save</guilabel>. The new volume group will then become
available in the <guilabel>Volume Group</guilabel> drop-down menu; you can
then go through your existing mount points and change this setting to assign them to a
different volume group.
</para>
</step>
<step>
diff --git a/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddPhysical.xml b/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddPhysical.xml
index 56ef81e..c2c8a5f 100644
--- a/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddPhysical.xml
+++ b/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddPhysical.xml
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- In the new dialog window, specify a mount point you want to create a
separate logical volume for - for example, <filename
class="directory">/</filename>. Optionally, specify a size for the
volume using standard units such as MB or GB (for example,
<literal>50GB</literal>). Then, click <guilabel>Add mount
point</guilabel> to add the volume and return to the main partitioning screen.
+ In the new dialog window, specify a mount point for which you want to
create a separate logical volume - for example, <filename
class="directory">/</filename>. Optionally, specify a size for the
volume using standard units such as MB or GB (for example,
<literal>50GB</literal>). Then, click <guilabel>Add mount
point</guilabel> to add the volume and return to the main partitioning screen.
</para>
<note>
<para>
diff --git a/en-US/CustomSpoke_RecommendedScheme.xml
b/en-US/CustomSpoke_RecommendedScheme.xml
index 9fcbd27..cb72e93 100644
--- a/en-US/CustomSpoke_RecommendedScheme.xml
+++ b/en-US/CustomSpoke_RecommendedScheme.xml
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@
</variablelist>
<important>
<para>
- If your system requires either a BIOS Boot partition or an EFI
System Partition based on the requirements detailed above, this partition must be created
as a standard physical partition. It can not reside on a LVM volume or a Btrfs subvolume.
+ If your system requires either a BIOS Boot partition or an EFI
System Partition based on the requirements detailed above, this partition must be created
as a standard physical partition. It can not reside on an LVM volume or a Btrfs
subvolume.
</para>
</important>
<para>
diff --git a/en-US/CustomSpoke_SoftwareRAID.xml b/en-US/CustomSpoke_SoftwareRAID.xml
index 9889157..2550345 100644
--- a/en-US/CustomSpoke_SoftwareRAID.xml
+++ b/en-US/CustomSpoke_SoftwareRAID.xml
@@ -36,11 +36,11 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- In the new dialog window, specify a mount point you want to create a
software RAID device for - for example, <filename
class="directory">/</filename>. Optionally, specify a size for the
volume using standard units such as MB or GB (for example,
<literal>50GB</literal>). Then, click <guilabel>Add mount
point</guilabel> to add the volume and return to the main partitioning screen.
+ In the new dialog window, specify a mount point for which you want to
create a separate logical volume - for example, <filename
class="directory">/</filename>. Optionally, specify a size for the
volume using standard units such as MB or GB (for example,
<literal>50GB</literal>). Then, click <guilabel>Add mount
point</guilabel> to add the volume and return to the main partitioning screen.
</para>
<note>
<para>
- When creating mount point for swap on software RAID, specify the
mount point as <literal>swap</literal>.
+ When creating a mount point for swap on software RAID, specify the
mount point as <literal>swap</literal>.
</para>
</note>
</step>