commit e1594af0f1291dce14cbe1a0db622be1e9e62d0e Author: Petr Bokoc pbokoc@redhat.com Date: Fri Nov 7 16:16:42 2014 +0100
Small clarifications in SoftwareSpoke
en-US/SoftwareSpoke.xml | 6 +++--- 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) --- diff --git a/en-US/SoftwareSpoke.xml b/en-US/SoftwareSpoke.xml index ac129c7..acee8a2 100644 --- a/en-US/SoftwareSpoke.xml +++ b/en-US/SoftwareSpoke.xml @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ The <guilabel>Software Selection</guilabel> screen allows you to choose a <firstterm>Base Environment</firstterm> and <firstterm>Add-ons</firstterm>. These options control which software packages will be installed on your system during the installation process. </para> <para> - This screen is only available if there is an installation source configured in <xref linkend="sect-installation-gui-installation-source" />. + This screen is only available if <xref linkend="sect-installation-gui-installation-source" /> is properly configured and only after the installer has downloaded package metadata from the source. </para> <note> <para> @@ -17,13 +17,13 @@ </para> </note> <para> - The availability of environments and add-ons depends on the installation source specified in <xref linkend="sect-installation-gui-installation-source" />. By default, the selection depends on the installation media you used to start the installation; Fedora Server installation image will have different environments and add-ons available for selection than, for example, the Fedora Cloud image. You can change this by configuring a different installation source containing different environments. + The availability of environments and add-ons depends on your installation source. By default, the selection depends on the installation media you used to start the installation; Fedora Server installation image will have different environments and add-ons available for selection than, for example, the Fedora Cloud image. You can change this by configuring a different installation source containing different environments. </para> <para> <remark>TODO: screen</remark> </para> <para> - Select an environment on the left side of the screen. Only one environment can be selected, even if more are available. Then, on the right side of the screen, select one or more add-ons which you want to install by marking the check boxes next to each add-on. + To configure your software selection, first choose an environment on the left side of the screen. Only one environment can be chosen, even if more are available. Then, on the right side of the screen, select one or more add-ons which you want to install by marking the check boxes next to each add-on. </para> <para> The list of add-ons is divided into two parts by a horizontal line. Add-ons above this line are defined as part of your chosen environment; if you select a different environment, the add-ons available here will change. The add-ons displayed below the separator are not specific to your chosen environment.
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