commit 07386b51017b1476a3563434c3aeea2bbc3441b2
Author: Petr Bokoc <pbokoc(a)redhat.com>
Date: Tue Nov 18 17:00:50 2014 +0100
More grammar and technical issues in CustomSpoke
en-US/CustomSpoke_AddBtrfs.xml | 2 +-
en-US/CustomSpoke_AddLVM.xml | 2 +-
en-US/CustomSpoke_AddPhysical.xml | 7 ++-----
en-US/CustomSpoke_SoftwareRAID.xml | 11 ++++-------
4 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddBtrfs.xml b/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddBtrfs.xml
index 542b1c9..6e4aca9 100644
--- a/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddBtrfs.xml
+++ b/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddBtrfs.xml
@@ -83,6 +83,6 @@
Repeat this procedure for any additional Btrfs subvolumes you want to create.
Note that when creating additional subvolumes, a new volume is not automatically created
each time; instead, any additional subvolumes are assigned to an existing volume.
</para>
<para>
- For each mount point you create, review its settings and make sure that it is
assigned to the correct volume, that it has a sufficient capacity, and that it has a
descriptive name so you can identify the volume later if you need to.
+ For each mount point you create, review its settings and make sure that it is
assigned to the correct volume, that it has sufficient capacity, and that it has a
descriptive name so you can identify the subvolume later if you need to.
</para>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddLVM.xml b/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddLVM.xml
index f99686f..3ba4616 100644
--- a/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddLVM.xml
+++ b/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddLVM.xml
@@ -88,6 +88,6 @@
Repeat this procedure for any additional logical volumes you want to create. Note
that when creating additional LVM logical volumes, a new volume group is not automatically
created each time; instead, any additional volumes are assigned to an existing group.
</para>
<para>
- For each mount point you create, review its settings and make sure that it is
assigned to the correct group, that it has a sufficient capacity, and that it has a
descriptive name so you can identify the volume later if you need to.
+ For each mount point you create, review its settings and make sure that it is
assigned to the correct group, that it has sufficient capacity, and that it has a
descriptive name so you can identify the volume later if you need to.
</para>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddPhysical.xml b/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddPhysical.xml
index 5ba8043..846c28a 100644
--- a/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddPhysical.xml
+++ b/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddPhysical.xml
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- In the <guilabel>Configure Mount Point</guilabel> dialog, you
can specify which physical devices (disks) this volume
<emphasis>may</emphasis> reside on. You can select one or more disks which
will be used to hold this volume by holding down <keycap>Ctrl</keycap> and
clicking each disk in the list. If you select multiple disks here,
<application>Anaconda</application> will determine where exactly the partition
should be created based on how you configured the rest of the installation; if you want to
make sure that this partition is placed on a specific hard drive, select only that drive
and unselect all others.
+ In the <guilabel>Configure Mount Point</guilabel> dialog, you
can specify which physical devices (disks) this volume
<emphasis>may</emphasis> reside on. You can select one or more disks which
will be used to hold this volume by holding down <keycap>Ctrl</keycap> and
clicking each disk in the list. If you select multiple disks here,
<application>Anaconda</application> will determine where exactly the partition
should be created based on how you configured the rest of the installation. If you want to
make sure that this partition is placed on a specific hard drive, select only that drive
and unselect all others.
</para>
<para>
After you finish configuring the partition's location, click
<guilabel>Save</guilabel> to return to the main <guilabel>Manual
Partitioning</guilabel> screen.
@@ -57,14 +57,11 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- Configure other settings specific to the subvolume - its
<guilabel>Mount Point</guilabel>, <guilabel>Desired
Capacity</guilabel>, and <guilabel>File System</guilabel>. Press
<guilabel>Update Settings</guilabel> to apply any changes to the
configuration.
+ Configure other settings specific to the partition - its
<guilabel>Mount Point</guilabel>, <guilabel>Desired
Capacity</guilabel>, and <guilabel>File System</guilabel>. Press
<guilabel>Update Settings</guilabel> to apply any changes to the
configuration.
</para>
</step>
</procedure>
<para>
Repeat this procedure for any additional standard partitions you want to create.
</para>
- <para>
- For each mount point you create, review its settings and make sure that it is
assigned to the correct volume, that it has a sufficient capacity, and that it has a
descriptive name so you can identify the volume later if you need to.
- </para>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/CustomSpoke_SoftwareRAID.xml b/en-US/CustomSpoke_SoftwareRAID.xml
index 2550345..0d952d0 100644
--- a/en-US/CustomSpoke_SoftwareRAID.xml
+++ b/en-US/CustomSpoke_SoftwareRAID.xml
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- In the new dialog window, specify a mount point for which you want to
create a separate logical volume - for example, <filename
class="directory">/</filename>. Optionally, specify a size for the
volume using standard units such as MB or GB (for example,
<literal>50GB</literal>). Then, click <guilabel>Add mount
point</guilabel> to add the volume and return to the main partitioning screen.
+ In the new dialog window, specify a mount point for which you want to
create a separate software RAID partition - for example, <filename
class="directory">/</filename>. Optionally, specify a size for the new
partition using standard units such as MB or GB (for example,
<literal>50GB</literal>). Then, click <guilabel>Add mount
point</guilabel> to add the mount point and return to the main partitioning screen.
</para>
<note>
<para>
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- The mount point has now been created using the default settings, which
means it has been created as an LVM logical volume. Select the newly created mount point
in the left pane to configure it further, and convert it to a physical partition by
changing the <guilabel>Device Type</guilabel> option to
<guilabel>RAID</guilabel>.
+ The mount point has now been created using the default settings, which
means it has been created as an LVM logical volume. Select the newly created mount point
in the left pane to configure it further, and convert it to a software RAID partition by
changing the <guilabel>Device Type</guilabel> option to
<guilabel>RAID</guilabel>.
</para>
</step>
<step>
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- In the <guilabel>Configure Mount Point</guilabel> dialog, you
can specify which physical devices (disks) this volume
<emphasis>may</emphasis> reside on. You can select one or more disks which
will be used to hold this volume by holding down <keycap>Ctrl</keycap> and
clicking each disk in the list. If you select multiple disks here,
<application>Anaconda</application> will determine where exactly the partition
should be created based on how you configured the rest of the installation; if you want to
make sure that this partition is placed on a specific set of hard drives, select only
those drives and unselect all others.
+ In the <guilabel>Configure Mount Point</guilabel> dialog, you
can specify which physical devices (disks) this partition
<emphasis>may</emphasis> reside on. You can select one or more disks which
will be used to hold this partition by holding down <keycap>Ctrl</keycap> and
clicking each disk in the list. If you want to make sure that this partition is placed on
a specific set of hard drives, select only those drives and unselect all others.
</para>
<para>
After you finish configuring the partition's location, click
<guilabel>Save</guilabel> to return to the main <guilabel>Manual
Partitioning</guilabel> screen.
@@ -69,14 +69,11 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- Configure other settings specific to the subvolume - its
<guilabel>Mount Point</guilabel>, <guilabel>Desired
Capacity</guilabel>, and <guilabel>File System</guilabel>. Press
<guilabel>Update Settings</guilabel> to apply any changes to the
configuration.
+ Configure other settings specific to the partition - its
<guilabel>Mount Point</guilabel>, <guilabel>Desired
Capacity</guilabel>, and <guilabel>File System</guilabel>. Press
<guilabel>Update Settings</guilabel> to apply any changes to the
configuration.
</para>
</step>
</procedure>
<para>
Repeat this procedure for any additional standard partitions with software RAID
you want to create.
</para>
- <para>
- For each mount point you create, review its settings and make sure that it is
assigned to the correct volume, that it has a sufficient capacity, and that it has a
descriptive name so you can identify the volume later if you need to.
- </para>
</section>