commit f172a0be493e5a9a8f3bee1d1c90a7eef5e14fe9 Author: Stephen Wadeley swadeley@redhat.com Date: Wed Dec 10 07:51:49 2014 +0100
misc updates to preface
en-US/System_Administrators_Guide.xml | 6 +++--- 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) --- diff --git a/en-US/System_Administrators_Guide.xml b/en-US/System_Administrators_Guide.xml index b818c43..5118f7d 100644 --- a/en-US/System_Administrators_Guide.xml +++ b/en-US/System_Administrators_Guide.xml @@ -11,14 +11,14 @@ <title>Basic System Configuration</title> <partintro> <para> - This part covers basic system administration tasks such as keyboard configuration, date and time configuration, installation and initial setup of an NTP server, and managing users and groups. + This part covers basic system administration tasks such as keyboard configuration, date and time configuration, managing users and groups, and gaining privileges. </para> </partintro> <xi:include href="Opening_GUI_Applications.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> <xi:include href="System_Locale_and_Keyboard_Configuration.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> <xi:include href="Configuring_the_Date_and_Time.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> <xi:include href="Managing_Users_and_Groups.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> - <!-- Gaining Privileges --> + <!-- <xi:include href="Gaining_Privileges.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> --> </part> <part id="part-Package_Management"> <title>Package Management</title> @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ <title>Servers</title> <partintro> <para> - This part discusses various topics related to servers such as how to set up a Web server or share files and directories over the network. + This part discusses various topics related to servers such as how to set up a web server or share files and directories over a network. </para> </partintro> <xi:include href="Web_Servers.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
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