[Bug 982656] New: A couple of suggestions for 9.17. Installation Complete

https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=982656 Bug ID: 982656 Summary: A couple of suggestions for 9.17. Installation Complete Product: Fedora Documentation Version: devel Component: install-guide Keywords: Documentation Severity: unspecified Priority: unspecified Assignee: pbokoc(a)redhat.com Reporter: pkovar(a)redhat.com QA Contact: docs-qa(a)lists.fedoraproject.org CC: oglesbyzm(a)gmail.com, pbokoc(a)redhat.com Hey Petr, Just a couple of suggestions for section 9.17. Installation Complete "Now that you have configured the remaining settings, your Fedora installation is now complete!" --> "Now that you have configured the remaining settings, your Fedora installation is complete." "9.17.1. Initial Setup in GNOME" --> GNOME Initial Setup "haven't" --> "have not" "The Initial Setup application is only available for GNOME." This might need some rewording since we now have two initial setup apps in Fedora (http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/NewFirstboot, https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/InitialExperience) that do almost the same thing, but target different DEs. "create an user account" --> "create a user account" "After you are finished configuring" --> "After you have finished configuring" "On the first login, the Gnome Help application will automatically open" The application is called Yelp, not Gnome Help. However, you probably just want to mention that "GNOME Help will automatically open...". "Figure 9.40. Language selection in Gnome Initial Setup" --> "Language selection in GNOME Initial Setup" -- You are receiving this mail because: You are the QA Contact for the bug.