Paul:
Thanks for the feedback. I did some more editing -- added a video (youtube) and
information on where to get instructions on how to play the game.
I changed the article to pending review.
Charles
---- On Tue, 04 Oct 2016 05:55:04 -0700 Paul W. Frields <stickster(a)gmail.com> wrote
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On Sun, Oct 02, 2016 at 12:21:21AM -0400, charles profitt wrote:
> Let me know if this fits the short how-to article that we are looking
> for to help drive some traffic to the magazine.
>
>
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14796&preview=1&_ppp=1fde0cfb24
This is just fine for a short how-to article. I did some light
editing. But it could also use a few sentences at the end telling
users where to find resources like game directions, or else tell the
reader how to find those in the game itself to get started. No need
to explain all the rules in this article, though.
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