[install-guide/f21-branch] More grammar and technical issues in CustomSpoke

commit 07386b51017b1476a3563434c3aeea2bbc3441b2 Author: Petr Bokoc <pbokoc(a)redhat.com&gt; Date: Tue Nov 18 17:00:50 2014 +0100 More grammar and technical issues in CustomSpoke en-US/CustomSpoke_AddBtrfs.xml | 2 +- en-US/CustomSpoke_AddLVM.xml | 2 +- en-US/CustomSpoke_AddPhysical.xml | 7 ++----- en-US/CustomSpoke_SoftwareRAID.xml | 11 ++++------- 4 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-) --- diff --git a/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddBtrfs.xml b/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddBtrfs.xml index 542b1c9..6e4aca9 100644 --- a/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddBtrfs.xml +++ b/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddBtrfs.xml @@ -83,6 +83,6 @@ Repeat this procedure for any additional Btrfs subvolumes you want to create. Note that when creating additional subvolumes, a new volume is not automatically created each time; instead, any additional subvolumes are assigned to an existing volume. </para> <para> - For each mount point you create, review its settings and make sure that it is assigned to the correct volume, that it has a sufficient capacity, and that it has a descriptive name so you can identify the volume later if you need to. + For each mount point you create, review its settings and make sure that it is assigned to the correct volume, that it has sufficient capacity, and that it has a descriptive name so you can identify the subvolume later if you need to. </para> </section> diff --git a/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddLVM.xml b/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddLVM.xml index f99686f..3ba4616 100644 --- a/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddLVM.xml +++ b/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddLVM.xml @@ -88,6 +88,6 @@ Repeat this procedure for any additional logical volumes you want to create. Note that when creating additional LVM logical volumes, a new volume group is not automatically created each time; instead, any additional volumes are assigned to an existing group. </para> <para> - For each mount point you create, review its settings and make sure that it is assigned to the correct group, that it has a sufficient capacity, and that it has a descriptive name so you can identify the volume later if you need to. + For each mount point you create, review its settings and make sure that it is assigned to the correct group, that it has sufficient capacity, and that it has a descriptive name so you can identify the volume later if you need to. </para> </section> diff --git a/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddPhysical.xml b/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddPhysical.xml index 5ba8043..846c28a 100644 --- a/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddPhysical.xml +++ b/en-US/CustomSpoke_AddPhysical.xml @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ </step> <step> <para> - In the <guilabel>Configure Mount Point</guilabel> dialog, you can specify which physical devices (disks) this volume <emphasis>may</emphasis> reside on. You can select one or more disks which will be used to hold this volume by holding down <keycap>Ctrl</keycap> and clicking each disk in the list. If you select multiple disks here, <application>Anaconda</application> will determine where exactly the partition should be created based on how you configured the rest of the installation; if you want to make sure that this partition is placed on a specific hard drive, select only that drive and unselect all others. + In the <guilabel>Configure Mount Point</guilabel> dialog, you can specify which physical devices (disks) this volume <emphasis>may</emphasis> reside on. You can select one or more disks which will be used to hold this volume by holding down <keycap>Ctrl</keycap> and clicking each disk in the list. If you select multiple disks here, <application>Anaconda</application> will determine where exactly the partition should be created based on how you configured the rest of the installation. If you want to make sure that this partition is placed on a specific hard drive, select only that drive and unselect all others. </para> <para> After you finish configuring the partition's location, click <guilabel>Save</guilabel> to return to the main <guilabel>Manual Partitioning</guilabel> screen. @@ -57,14 +57,11 @@ </step> <step> <para> - Configure other settings specific to the subvolume - its <guilabel>Mount Point</guilabel>, <guilabel>Desired Capacity</guilabel>, and <guilabel>File System</guilabel>. Press <guilabel>Update Settings</guilabel> to apply any changes to the configuration. + Configure other settings specific to the partition - its <guilabel>Mount Point</guilabel>, <guilabel>Desired Capacity</guilabel>, and <guilabel>File System</guilabel>. Press <guilabel>Update Settings</guilabel> to apply any changes to the configuration. </para> </step> </procedure> <para> Repeat this procedure for any additional standard partitions you want to create. </para> - <para> - For each mount point you create, review its settings and make sure that it is assigned to the correct volume, that it has a sufficient capacity, and that it has a descriptive name so you can identify the volume later if you need to. - </para> </section> diff --git a/en-US/CustomSpoke_SoftwareRAID.xml b/en-US/CustomSpoke_SoftwareRAID.xml index 2550345..0d952d0 100644 --- a/en-US/CustomSpoke_SoftwareRAID.xml +++ b/en-US/CustomSpoke_SoftwareRAID.xml @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ </step> <step> <para> - In the new dialog window, specify a mount point for which you want to create a separate logical volume - for example, <filename class="directory">/</filename>. Optionally, specify a size for the volume using standard units such as MB or GB (for example, <literal>50GB</literal>). Then, click <guilabel>Add mount point</guilabel> to add the volume and return to the main partitioning screen. + In the new dialog window, specify a mount point for which you want to create a separate software RAID partition - for example, <filename class="directory">/</filename>. Optionally, specify a size for the new partition using standard units such as MB or GB (for example, <literal>50GB</literal>). Then, click <guilabel>Add mount point</guilabel> to add the mount point and return to the main partitioning screen. </para> <note> <para> @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ </step> <step> <para> - The mount point has now been created using the default settings, which means it has been created as an LVM logical volume. Select the newly created mount point in the left pane to configure it further, and convert it to a physical partition by changing the <guilabel>Device Type</guilabel> option to <guilabel>RAID</guilabel>. + The mount point has now been created using the default settings, which means it has been created as an LVM logical volume. Select the newly created mount point in the left pane to configure it further, and convert it to a software RAID partition by changing the <guilabel>Device Type</guilabel> option to <guilabel>RAID</guilabel>. </para> </step> <step> @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ </step> <step> <para> - In the <guilabel>Configure Mount Point</guilabel> dialog, you can specify which physical devices (disks) this volume <emphasis>may</emphasis> reside on. You can select one or more disks which will be used to hold this volume by holding down <keycap>Ctrl</keycap> and clicking each disk in the list. If you select multiple disks here, <application>Anaconda</application> will determine where exactly the partition should be created based on how you configured the rest of the installation; if you want to make sure that this partition is placed on a specific set of hard drives, select only those drives and unselect all others. + In the <guilabel>Configure Mount Point</guilabel> dialog, you can specify which physical devices (disks) this partition <emphasis>may</emphasis> reside on. You can select one or more disks which will be used to hold this partition by holding down <keycap>Ctrl</keycap> and clicking each disk in the list. If you want to make sure that this partition is placed on a specific set of hard drives, select only those drives and unselect all others. </para> <para> After you finish configuring the partition's location, click <guilabel>Save</guilabel> to return to the main <guilabel>Manual Partitioning</guilabel> screen. @@ -69,14 +69,11 @@ </step> <step> <para> - Configure other settings specific to the subvolume - its <guilabel>Mount Point</guilabel>, <guilabel>Desired Capacity</guilabel>, and <guilabel>File System</guilabel>. Press <guilabel>Update Settings</guilabel> to apply any changes to the configuration. + Configure other settings specific to the partition - its <guilabel>Mount Point</guilabel>, <guilabel>Desired Capacity</guilabel>, and <guilabel>File System</guilabel>. Press <guilabel>Update Settings</guilabel> to apply any changes to the configuration. </para> </step> </procedure> <para> Repeat this procedure for any additional standard partitions with software RAID you want to create. </para> - <para> - For each mount point you create, review its settings and make sure that it is assigned to the correct volume, that it has a sufficient capacity, and that it has a descriptive name so you can identify the volume later if you need to. - </para> </section>