[Bug 962869] Some Textual improvements and a typographical correction

Product: Fedora Documentation https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=962869 Pete Travis <me(a)petetravis.com&gt; changed: What |Removed |Added ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Status|NEW |ON_QA CC| |me(a)petetravis.com --- Comment #2 from Pete Travis <me(a)petetravis.com&gt; --- I've made a number of changes based on the attachments. Thanks for your review, Leslie! -- You are receiving this mail because: You are the QA Contact for the bug.