On Sun, 2004-05-09 at 08:41, Sulyok Péter wrote: http://sp.web.elte.hu/firewall-tutorial-en/sn-about.html Thanks for supplying the document XML source. Here are my fixes as a patch to the XML, along with some comments to explain them: http://people.redhat.com/kwade/patches/fedora-docs/firewall-tutorial/fire... * Your writing is good and clear. Trying to help as an editor. I make various 'fixes', some of which are more my personal style. Please take them as you will, they are intended to make the writing clearer and to help the reader, especially the newbie. * I'm sorry about the diff of the <para> blocks being so many lines; when I use M-q to indent paragraphs in Emacs, I get a very small indent size and I haven't tackled fixing that yet. * internet - Internet -- common usage, an internet is an worldwide computer network, the Internet is the specific internetwork we are trying to connect to. * For <ulink>, I make the target URL the linked text because I don't trust that it will appear correctly in PDF. Let me know if you have any questions about what I changed in the patch. You should be able to edit the patch and use the command 'patch firewall-tutorial-en.xml firewall-tutorial-en.xml-kwade.patch' to apply the changes to your document. I'd like to see this posted at http://fedora.redhat.com/docs as soon as possible! - Karsten -- Karsten Wade, Tech Writer this .signature subject to random changes` http://people.redhat.com/kwade/ gpg fingerprint: 2680 DBFD D968 3141 0115 5F1B D992 0E06 AD0E 0C41

On Fri, 2004-05-14 at 03:05, Matt Hansen wrote: Yes. It was late, and I blame ... poor editing? :) - Karsten -- Karsten Wade, Tech Writer this .signature subject to random changes http://people.redhat.com/kwade/ gpg fingerprint: 2680 DBFD D968 3141 0115 5F1B D992 0E06 AD0E 0C41