usb-hotplug-tutorial - Help needed

Cf. Bugzilla #128952. The usb-hotplug-tutorial (formerly updfstab-tutorial) is, I think, ready for some final proofing/editing by a fresh pair of eyes. Dave Pawson helped me quite a bit with some initial technical and editorial issues. Is there anyone out there who can check it out and let me know what you think? The URL's for various flavors of access are listed in Bugzilla until the thing moves into "publish-ready" stage. I am dead-set on getting this out soon, since it's useful for FC2 (and prior) users who are not yet ready to make the big switch to FC3 even after its final release. Thanks all. -- Paul W. Frields, RHCE