Hardening Doc Update 2

Hi all. I added some of the suggestions Paul gave me. I'm still working on some of the password stuff, and I would like to put screenshots in some places, but since I'm new to this whole way of documenting things, I'll have to do a little research on that one. Anyway, please check out the updates. I've updated the HTML version at http://members.cox.net/tuxxer as well as the XML, which can be found at the link below. http://members.cox.net/tuxxer/fedora-hardening-guide-whole-en.xml Please feel free to make comments, constructive criticism, etc. Depending upon the amount of feedback I get, I'll post a final here, then post that to the bug tracker. Thanks for all of the help and advice! Oh, I tried to do a 'make pdf', and it failed. It said there was no target, so maybe I grabbed the wrong Makefile when I got started or something. If anyone can point me in the direction to get this target into my Makefile, I'd like to make this as complete as possible. Thanks. -- -tuxxer gpg: 57EB F948 76AE 25BC E340 EFA9 FAF6 E1AC F1E1 1EA1