On Tue, 2018-06-12 at 22:02 +0000, Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek wrote:
On Tue, Jun 12, 2018 at 12:03:51PM -0700, Adam Williamson wrote:
> On Tue, 2018-06-12 at 20:55 +0200, Miro Hrončok wrote:
> > On 12.6.2018 20:35, Adam Williamson wrote:
> > > "The installed system must be able to install, remove, and install
> >
> > Install, remove and update?
>
> That would be simpler but unfortunately loses the "appropriate"
> wording, which is important. We could make it "appropriately update"
> but that reads kinda weird to me.
Miro has a point, this sentence doesn't make sense as is.
In "The installed system must be able to install, remove, and install
appropriate updates for software ..." the subject is "updates", so
both "install" and "remove" apply to it. Another noun must be
inserted.
No, it isn't. The sense is:
"The installed system must be able to:
1) install
2) remove
3) install appropriate updates for
software..."
If that isn't sufficiently clear, though, I'll try to reword it.
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