https://fedoraproject.org/w/index.php?title=Fedora_13_Talking_Points&... I updated the top couple of the talking points, to give an illustration of how to write these. (Of course, you could also look back at the F12 page too!) :-) I'm hoping that these can serve as a sort of guide for how to explain a talking point. The key is to explain the talking point to a lay audience who's not familiar with the technology involved. The summary sentence should be short and capture the spirit, momentum, and general appeal of the talking point. It answers the question "Give me the one-sentence elevator pitch for how this feature helps make Fedora awesome." -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ Where open source multiplies: http://opensource.com