On Thu, 05 Dec 2013 10:45:15 -0600
Joe Brockmeier <jzb(a)redhat.com> wrote:
On 12/05/2013 10:40 AM, Ruth Suehle wrote:
> Made edits. Like ya do. :-)
Thanks! Would appreciate more eyeballs if anyone else wants to look it
over
Looks overall great to me. ;)
Some nitpicks (feel free to ignore):
"Live Desktop DVD" seems weird. The Desktop live image is targeting a
1gb usb as far as I know... so perhaps "Live Desktop Image" ?
"free and open source operating system around every six months" reads
kind of weird to me. Perhaps:
"free and open source operating system twice a year"
(which actually wasn't true last year, but that was a weird one. ;)
Or 'approximately' instead of 'around' ? Not sure.
kevin