Oh, thank you very much!!
Sorry I couldn't attend.
Cheers,
Sylvia.
On Thursday, 9 June 2016, Justin W. Flory <jflory7(a)gmail.com> wrote:
On 06/09/2016 02:11 PM, Sylvia Sánchez wrote:
>
> Hi Huiren!
>
> Thanks, you're right, sounds way better in the way you wrote it, I'll
> fix it.
> Yes, you're right, it's "editing tools". I don't know why I
wrote it
> the other way. Thanks for pointing out.
>
>
> Cheers,
> Sylvia
>
>
>
Hey Sylvia, we reviewed this article in the meeting today, and Paul is
going to work on getting a featured image and editing to have it go out on
Monday, June 13.
Thanks for writing this one! :)
> On Thursday, 9 June 2016, Huiren Woo <giantcrabby(a)gmail.com
> <mailto:giantcrabby@gmail.com>> wrote:
>
> Hi Sylvia,
>
> Thanks for taking your time to write up this article! Amazing
> screenshots as a visual reference!
>
> Here are some comments:
>
> "Edition tools" - Did you mean 'Editing tools'?
> "It’s simple, tidy and lightweight, letting you manage your images
> by tags, folders and sites." - English here is a little odd, might
> wanna rephrase it to something like 'Its simplicity, tidiness allows
> you to manage your images by tags, folders and sites. On top of that,
> it's really lightweight.'
> The ending is a bit abrupt, might be good to have something to
> sum it up.
>
>
> Thanks!
>
> Best Regards,
> Woo Huiren
> Fedora Ambassador & Marketing | Open Organization Ambassador
>
>
https://twitter.com/woohuiren
>
>
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Cheers,
Justin W. Flory
jflory7(a)gmail.com